Avoid Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Avoid

Rating: 4.9


Slayers of happy thoughts
Slayers of free will
People who just wait
for you to have a fall

Mind controlling freaks
who think they deserve it all
We all know people like this
Try to avoid them all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Wisniewska 18 February 2012

succint and good advice!

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Heyyou Boy 30 December 2011

Words of wisdom. Great poem. Got my vote

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Buxton Shippy 29 December 2011

An admonition worth heeding...deserves a ten.

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Rekha Mandagere 29 December 2011

These are the people whom we think that they are our well wishers. But in reality they are slayers of happiness. Wonderful display of wisdom.Rekhamandagere

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Hans Vr 28 December 2011

Nice wisdom embedded in these verses. Well written poem, Dave. So true, the company of mind controllers, the company of negative friends can affect us badly

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 August 2013

Wow..Wonderful write with great message...Loved reading it.

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Ruby Honeytip 10 December 2012

Working on it Dave.....working on it: -)

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(De Va) 14 August 2012

well written with great advice....blessings

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Little Wolf 26 March 2012

This is the one i'll do a song for I love it! Fantastic poem!

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Valerie Dohren 07 March 2012

Simple, understandable poem - so true, thre world is full of people like this!

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