Daddy Said Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

Daddy Said

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as a child i used to think,
what would i be
when i grow up?
i asked daddy.
he would smile & gently pat my head.
then pulling his hand i would plead
'answer me daddy. answer me.'
looking at me lovingly,
daddy said
'be what you wish,
you're free. i leave you unleash.
no boundaries for you dear.
be what you want.
you choose your favourite future.'

for my dad Mr. Sanjoy Kumar Mitra.
Vishal Sharma 27 June 2013

nice dedication appreciated

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Unwritten Soul 28 June 2013

Awwww this is such a lovely write, sweet and beautiful yet also touching_SOul

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David Wood 29 June 2013

This is a lovely tribute to you dad and a lovely poem.

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Anubhav Gupta 04 July 2013

good one..... be what you are god bless

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

Awwwwwww! ...what a poem, such a lovely, excellently penned poem dear... I said to my daughter one day, I won't live your life for you, but I will be right here when you need me and give you the support you need, your father is a good man. He raised a good lady too, never disappoint him. Siya_! !

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Vishal Sharma 13 August 2015

beautiful future...... lovely choice of words. now you have turned to be a great poet from my motherland say. God bless you

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Ramesh Rai 16 October 2013

beautiful expression.daughters are always dearer to father but sorry i dont have daughter. but i can realise the softness of your write. keep it continued. poetry is the gift of GOD. a soothing with petfection. a great poetess.

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Shania K. Younce 05 October 2013

It is such a lovely poem.

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Indranil Bhaduri 10 July 2013

Beautiful expression of a daughter. Fantastic penning.

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Ankit Sharma 08 July 2013

gud one as always great

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