Daddy Said Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

Daddy Said

Rating: 5.0

as a child i used to think,
what would i be
when i grow up?
i asked daddy.
he would smile & gently pat my head.
then pulling his hand i would plead
'answer me daddy. answer me.'
looking at me lovingly,
daddy said
'be what you wish,
you're free. i leave you unleash.
no boundaries for you dear.
be what you want.
you choose your favourite future.'

for my dad Mr. Sanjoy Kumar Mitra.
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

Awwwwwww! ...what a poem, such a lovely, excellently penned poem dear... I said to my daughter one day, I won't live your life for you, but I will be right here when you need me and give you the support you need, your father is a good man. He raised a good lady too, never disappoint him. Siya_! !

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Anubhav Gupta 04 July 2013

good one..... be what you are god bless

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David Wood 29 June 2013

This is a lovely tribute to you dad and a lovely poem.

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Unwritten Soul 28 June 2013

Awwww this is such a lovely write, sweet and beautiful yet also touching_SOul

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Vishal Sharma 27 June 2013

nice dedication appreciated

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Vishal Sharma 13 August 2015

beautiful future...... lovely choice of words. now you have turned to be a great poet from my motherland say. God bless you

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Ramesh Rai 16 October 2013

beautiful expression.daughters are always dearer to father but sorry i dont have daughter. but i can realise the softness of your write. keep it continued. poetry is the gift of GOD. a soothing with petfection. a great poetess.

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Shania K. Younce 05 October 2013

It is such a lovely poem.

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Indranil Bhaduri 10 July 2013

Beautiful expression of a daughter. Fantastic penning.

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Ankit Sharma 08 July 2013

gud one as always great

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