Broken Lullaby Poem by Crimson Love

Broken Lullaby

Rating: 5.0


Shattered shards of a Broken lullaby,
are sung by one lone shadow,
Upon midnight mist, eyes of flame rummage in souls,
A Broken lullaby is gently sung,
Piece by piece every word upon ears of crimson hath rung,
A silent bell, chimes an unchimed rhyme,
The very soul to this broken lullaby.

My life as this song shall end upon shimmering flecks of dawn,
Shadow's shall sleep as did Crimson did so long,
Eyes must close, even if it's thought so wrong,
Listen to the hym of this lullaby, a remnant of a broken song.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 11 November 2011

Really love this a really great poem, it sent a bit of a shiver down my spine. A truly great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Dream world.

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invalid Files 11 November 2011

This is really pretty. I love your poems~ keep writing! !

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Abdallah Gamal 11 November 2011

Wow another beautiful poem, you conveyed the poem through simple words were written beautifully in this poem, and the rhyme is fantastic.Really outstanding! As usual you drew a poem through your inspiring imaginary and beautifully chosen words. I really enjoyed reading your awesome work here :)

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Lenore Lee 13 November 2011

Once again you've shown that there is beauty in breaking. Such a fantastic write =)

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Unwritten Soul 12 November 2011

That really impressive lullaby......Great art and mystery melody :) What the crimsomest talent you had hahaha :) Write more with your crimson ink! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++ _Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 12 November 2011

'A silent bell, chimes an unchimed rhyme, The very soul to this broken lullaby.' Generally, A-z poets including me - write about our lost love - requited love - dejected love but you are different kettle of fish. You have deep insight and single aim and single theme with undivided concentration... I think that's what made crimson red a crimson love. This poem dug deep in my solo heart. Solo fan single man rates your poem with 10++++++ :) :) :)

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Cosmic Dreamer 11 November 2011

'My life as this song shall end upon shimmering flecks of dawn, ' Pure brilliance... Such haunting beauty...

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Silentpoet Grl 11 November 2011

A beautiful poem of the melancholy kind. Fantastic in every way.

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