Broken Promises! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Promises are most often like writings on water!

Trust enlightens inner spirit. Broken promises bring pain and agony whether in real life or in dream. Echos break in air and we hear them in inner heart. Very mind-blowing drafting of this poem with interesting imagery makes this special. EXCELLENT WORK.10

Trust is most fragile and most precious thing to break. It is done so easily with broken promises. Takes a long time to recover and to build and create new trust in life. Very apt poem with some beautiful lines. Thanks for sharing Geetha!

impressive piece of art. though poem is sad.

The harvest was sold and profits were booked Everything was done at the cost of ones trust... Waooo...what a definition... outstanding poetry Mam. The very first line is so alluring and deep. Can feel it the life thru your write. It impressed me. Thank you so much. I do not how I came thru this..full 10

It was mere a game to play with ones heart Where each breath cried on being fooled in life.....touching expression! Appreciated this excellent piece. Top score dear poetess!

A broken promise breaks the heart and plunges one into misery and despair. A lovely poem which will surely serve as a forewarning to all readers.

It was mere a game to play with ones heart Where each breath cried on being fooled in life. what a nice poem....well done...thanks for sharing

It is the promise we are living to fulfill the promise or else there is no need of life. I share your emotions equally. Thanks for sharing. Regards. +10

No more words or explanation is required since you have made it abundantly clear. Thanks. Promises are the words..that pierced the knife in ones heart! .... They cannot be trusted though they are written deep in ones heart. One cannot forget the words that pierced the knife in ones heart!