Chain Of High States Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Chain Of High States

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The stars are replenished with heaven,
Heaven the happiness in sublime,
Sublime, whose peak where joy is winning,
Winning with ecstacy as the clouds,
The clouds of high minds dashing with light,
With light on their passage to splendour.
Splendour, the garden where the hearts bloom,
Hearts bloom into flowers bright like fairies,
Fairies captivating in their forms,
Their forms pale that bedazzle with wings,
With wings of the butterflies luring,
Luring eyes awed to perceive beauty.
Beauty in their vision is smiling,
Smiling with the vigour of meadows,
Meadows where the horses are sprinting,
Sprinting with gladness vast in the arms,
The arms of liberty which heartens,
Heartens their passions into the wind.
The wind storming furiously across,
Across the streaming silver river.
River vibrant in its mood man fishes.
Fishes the feeling he nets with pen.
With pen as he sinks into the realm,
The realm of wondrous stories that glow,
That glow like the birds lit by the stars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 16 June 2009

excellent visual metaphors: ''Splendour, the garden where the hearts bloom, Bloom into flowers bright like the fairies, '' excellent visual cognitive metaphors: ''Fairies captivating in their forms'' this poem seemingly touch the perfection of aesthetics...10++

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Surya . 29 June 2009

a chain of beautiful multiples that leads to splendor. how beautifully done voted10 surya

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Mubeen Sadhika 03 July 2009

nicely composed beautiful poem.

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Danny H 03 July 2009

A magnificent chain of beautiful metaphors: leading from one to another it was Amazing-------- very beautiful

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Callie Valentine 03 July 2009

This is a really amazing and beautiful poem. Wonderful job!

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Prasetya Utama 16 October 2009

Beautifull words come from beautifull heart. All of those created beautifull poem.

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Ria Vasavan 30 September 2009

I'm obliged that I got to read such a lovely creation about Nature . The interestiing part is the continuty in the poem , how beautifully connected and carried on further . Hats off to you . This one is an inspiration for me . 10 arte one is this .

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Arthean Williams 05 July 2009

beautiful! ! ! ! i love how you were able to blend each sentence with the other.. you have a knack for poetry

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Christian Navarro 05 July 2009

you've made a great poem! i'll also try to write about nature next time...

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 05 July 2009

very amazing & great poem, i loved it10+

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