Geetha Jayakumar
Kerala Palakkad
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Don'T Fall In Love With Me!

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Don't fall in love with me
I am mere an illusion
A tiny part of this wonderful creation.

The moment you start loving me
I will disappear in no time
I am mere a body
Where soul brightens my life.
So, Don't fall in love with me
I am a beautiful maiden
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Sunday, June 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
This poem I wrote completely thinking of soul and body. Where body is mortal while soul is immortal. A body without soul and soul without body, one cannot imagine or cannot be called a living being..Both should be there to make you and me means a human being or even a living beings. What I want to convey through this poem is love the inner self as outer beauty withers away in time(age) . I too agree when we look a person, we see the beauty, but don't think that beauty is going to be the same even after years. Where as soul is same, the way you feel it, but you cannot see. Whatever you feel inside is reflected outside. Feeling of happiness should come from within not from outside....Thank you for taking patience to read the notes.
Mihaela Pirjol 10 November 2014
This is a great poem Geetha. I really enjoyed reading it... so true!
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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2014
I gazed at the moon followed all creativity but could not notice when started loving n became the symbol of love for the people of this earth.
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Falling in love, and hurting your nose Is all to common among us folks To bend on your knee and offer a rose Is always a well played out hoax................ Very good write up... Actually love is body falling in love with a another body aided by stupid minds.
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Saadat Tahir 06 July 2014
Neela Nath (6/23/2014 11: 49: 00 AM) I think this poem is charged with double meaning.It's a kind of satire too.Very intelligent write! Admirable! indeed i second neela in her opinion...lovely poem
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Mihaela Pirjol 06 July 2014
The truth and wisdom shines in this remarkable write.Art at its best.
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Akhtar Jawad 04 July 2014
I think always there is a quality in someone that attracts others. This force of attraction cannot be controlled. When this attraction comes on its climax an emotional reaction of the same is love. This seventy years old Sanaysi Baba can only say love is helpless and it is a futile effort to advice someone not to love. But your poem is very beautiful and I really liked it.
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Harindhar Reddy 30 June 2014
Wonderful words flowed in to a poem. I cherish the philosophic theme of poem. your idea in the poem is echoing in my heart. A great way of expressing real love. Very simply love the soul which is permanent not the perishable body. Well done!
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Love not mortal being but thy soul is the message my all...............Geetha..............great write..................
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Amitava Sur 27 June 2014
A lovely poem you wrote Geetha, where I can feel you emoting and saying with a heavy heart not to love the you (the body) which is perishable...... beautiful.
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Soumita Sarkar 25 June 2014
Yup! true we make Guest this movie of life.............spirituality imbibed....Thanks....Will you read few of my poems....? ?
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