Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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Erawan Waterfall

Rating: 5.0
The water falls into the pool.
The day is warm; the water's cool.
It's like no place you've ever seen;
to miss this sight you'd be a fool.

Kanchanburi has set the scene;
the water and the trees are green.
To call it lovely's only right;
to see it, you'd know what I mean.

The waterfalls seem almost white
and make the sun seem twice as bright.
They don't show things like this in school;
It truly is a gorgeous sight.
Erawan Waterfall
A picture of this place in Thailand popped up as my computer background so I had to learn more about it. 12 March 2021
M.J. Lemon 16 March 2021
Terrific verse....It is a place I do need to see...
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Darwin Henry Beuning 13 March 2021
Kim, I have been to Thailand many times, but, I have never visited the Erawan National Park. I will visit on my next trip. The road distance from Bangkok is 191.8 km, (119 miles) .5 stars
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Deluke Muwanigwa 13 March 2021
Beautiful poem and ode to a wonder of nature. The rhymes cascading wet, i bet i would set my eyes, no lies, till late.
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Belle Wassermeister 12 March 2021
Terrific rhyme pattern! Very lovely poem and picture!
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 March 2021
A great poem..... loved the ba
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Captain Cur 12 March 2021
Nothing like a picturesque scene to get those poetic juices flowing, a beautiful write!
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Kim Barney 12 March 2021
I just noticed that I had two lines in stanza two ending with the same word, so I have revised it, but the revision may not show up for a while. Sometimes revisions take two or three days to show up on Poem Hunter.
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Varsha M 12 March 2021
Sir. This is soothing. Peace. I loved it. And your words really is too picturesque. Loved it. Into my favourite.
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Cowboy Ron Williams 12 March 2021
Wow! This is fantastic stuff, Kim! I think this may be one of your best yet. I love the rhyme pattern! Five stars for sure!
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