Every Mountain Poem by Unwritten Soul

Every Mountain

Rating: 5.0


Mountains of all continents
Layering heights to the earth
Guiding clouds to release the rain
Inspire ones who see below from above
...Its never just sands and rocks stacking

Mountains in the seas
Hiding below under its calm surfaces
When the wind calls, and turbulence awake
When you'll find the cliff, you'll climb the peak
...Its never flat, never a hill, uncertainty

Mountains in life
Hiding behind your lifetime
It progresses higher and taller
As we grow older
...It never an easy journey but with a remedy

As Life keep progressing
We will continue climbing
And the journey slowly reveal the story
As slowly we can view better from above, clearly
We will see like we at the highest mountain
As life keeps progressing
We will be on the surface of the present, uncertainty
Like the mountain, hidden underneath the seas
...As we have more to live, it will reveal
...it cant be not easy, but pain comes with a remedy

Monday, October 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: self reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem initiated just after i paint an abstract painting, and i wrote small poem under it...somehow i just expand it to be longer version here..It just an instant writing, wild thought always call my mind to somewhere else...and that the best thing i do when i want to write...random but with some thought about something hahaha.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2018

It is a best philosophical poem on self reflection. Haunting expression is done. Nice theme. Let it be cited... As life keeps progressing We will be on the surface of the present, uncertainty Like the mountain, hidden underneath the seas ...As we have more to live, it will reveal ...it cant be not easy, but pain comes with a remedy. Thanks for sharing.10

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Hans Vr 19 October 2018

Mountains we climb, valleys we visit. When simple love and kindness are generating simple smiles around the eyes of people who seemed moments before have no smiles left, I seem to be on top of a hill. Deep reflection and silent soulful prayer are perhaps the best remedies when through valleys, we wade. Wonderful, thought provoking poem.

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Mj Lemon 19 October 2018

Soul, this is among your very best. I saw the mountain as metaphor for overcoming a great obstacle. I see the mountain as a type of resistance that builds endurance. But something in your words....there is the thought that one may be atop the highest mountain on earth, and still be under water. An amazing verse, Soul

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Anjandev Roy 20 January 2021

Simply brilliant.....thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 February 2020

A great metaphorical write, powerful and insightful. I concur with the beautiful thoughts woven by the Poet. Yes, life's journey is like climbing a mountain. Beautifully written and full of wisdom.

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2019

Awesome poem, I admire your style of writing. Long time I did not see you writing any poems, Don't stop writing dear Unwritten Soul...10+++

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Rebecca Navarre 03 January 2019

Powerfully and beautifully written! .. Deeply beautiful thoughts, very heart moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Muhammad Ali 24 November 2018

Hi friend. Yes everything in this world is to be explored and is the way of learning and the key to wisdom. Best thing is how we implement all the positivity in our life. Where pain comes with remedy. Nice poem.

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