Everyday Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Everyday

Rating: 5.0


On the fragrant petals the waiting eyes
The snowballs making whitest the dawn
Doves chirping waking up with the sunrise
On the morning door, you knocking the heart
Through crystal glass the cat's eyes observing
Hot coffee of the cup evaporating the tears
The feelings kissing your salacious tone to tone
On the yolk of the sun every day our love is born


© Mahtab Bangalee
13 February,2022
Chattogram

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

On the morning door, you knocking the heart, beautiful expression

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2022

Beautiful, a beautiful poem.....so well penned.5 stars

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Deluke Muwanigwa 13 February 2022

Metaphors sublime

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David Wood 13 February 2022

A real lovely poem filled with good metaphors. A worthy 10*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 February 2022

not only it's bright but truly beautiful Bravo!

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Abedin Mohammad Zoynul 24 February 2022

The theme, metaphors, and thoghts of the poem enchant me a lot. I appreciate you

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Abedin Mohammad Zoynul 24 February 2022

The theme, language and metaphors are lucid and enchanting which captivate and fascinate our minds. The metaphor 'cat's eye observing' is excellent.

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The theme, metaphors, and thoghts of the poem enchant me a lot. I appreciate you.

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Mac Che 14 February 2022

beautiful imagery you are created here. everyday is the day of love for lover and beloved

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 14 February 2022

Excellent poem with apt metaphors. Liked it.

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