Five Liner- A Little Song On Spring Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner- A Little Song On Spring

Rating: 5.0


After the sleet and snow of winter
Life prepares to take a rebirth
To adorn the barren spaces in a riot of colours
Sunlight glistens, daffodils and daisies spring
Bringing joy and cheer to uncounted hearts

Monday, February 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cheer,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 15 February 2016

A riot of colors...beautiful. Spring is truly a time of rebirth. This poem really brightens up the mood of the reader. Thanx for sharing.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 16 February 2016

Spring.....reincarnation of nature.....Beautiful.....Beautifully expressed in few lines.....thank you for sharing :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2016

To adorn the barren spaces. Nice piece of work.

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Kelly Kurt 16 February 2016

I too look forward to the first blooms of spring. Poetry in themselves

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Souren Mondal 16 February 2016

Nothing is quite as beautiful as Spring.. Here in West Bengals we have cuckoos singing all day long.. A beautiful poem for a beautiful season..

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 March 2020

My usual worries are: spring does not last long, it looks as if it might this year. Thanks God, the poem is a five-liner. and not a haiku!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2020

A lovely little song on Spring. It captures the season of rebirth and renewal. A wonderful description full of images. Beautifully written.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 January 2020

Sunlight glistens, daffodils and daisies spring Bringing joy and cheer to uncounted hearts /// cheerful and delighted spring knocks the farewell chariot of winter to leave the earth hurry and spring the queen of seasons enjoys the earth with full of happiness and graceful embodiment///

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2018

How spring brings joy and cheer to uncounted hearts is nicely and touchingly delineated in this poem. A beautiful poem on spring shared amazingly.10

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Robert Murray Smith 10 July 2018

Spring has its melody in your poem Valsa.++10 Robert

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