Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Footnote 1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

chrysanthemums fly
swaying to the sky
footsteps of memory
in a white veil
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

I loved each word in this footnote! so natural/ a beautiful dedication! 10+++ Thanks For Sharing

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 October 2009

you know sir, I think I have read this before and made a comment but I have not seen/noticed the dedication. Wow! Thanks sir! Thanks a lot sir! but i just don't get it a little bit. I am just curious on why is it called 'footnote' and why does it describe a flower? I know poems are made of figuratives sometimes but I can't sometimes understand it. Anyway, sir your poems 'myth' are good!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 13 October 2009

beautiful words expressing your sentiments to a poet friend. The images and metaphors are striking! a 10

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Anand Madhukar 12 October 2009

Lovely piece with good use of metaphors.

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 10 October 2009

nice poem.. good choice of words.

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Louis Rams 09 October 2009

a good dedication to another poet.

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Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

wonderful dedication, well written poem, lovely to read......10+++++++++

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Lynda Robson 09 October 2009

Nice dedication as always so well described, Lynda xx 10

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Omar Ibrahim 09 October 2009

obed deserves it and more......good write 10

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Noel Horlanda 09 October 2009

Well crafted, artist of words...cheers 10+

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Saadat Tahir 09 October 2009

very nice my pick a half rainbow embroidered with joy ...beautiful imagery...classical good job cheers

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Antonio Liao 08 October 2009

wow! the melodic flow of words, dance with the lyrics of thought...i like to read.... makes my day complete....thank you for sharing this lines.... God bless my friend...a 10 +

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Eyan Desir 08 October 2009

Super flow good write

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 07 October 2009

Beautiful imageries of a strong imagination. Really a great write.10.

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The Lost.. 07 October 2009

nice words and nice poem too...anyways i like your way in writing :) thank you...

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Obinna Eruchie 07 October 2009

This has flowery words that are readable.

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Kranthi Pothineni 07 October 2009

Very nice and sweet flowed poem.

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Lynn Glover 07 October 2009

A well written poem for a dear friend. Lynn

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 07 October 2009

Written with pure love and affection and regard.

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Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

a nice tributary write...awesome...

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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