the rain pours lightly
a destiny is written
on silken gate
glowing
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The last stanza is magnificence...this 2 footnote is simply beautiful, my friend!
another language! ! ! wonderful! ! ! ii think it is your language...am i right? ?
like a humble heart perfected by soul.....it's rendezvous of life.....happen in the avenue of this beginning of time....wow! i do love the way you express it...God bless.... a 10 +
Mellifluous words, literally poetical and exciting.10.
'blooming of morning jasmine / gorgeously uncovered / a companion of love / mirrored, melting / your calm shadow / weave a dream of longing / soul tenderly brightens / so divine, so humble...' lovely lyrics devoted to Glamorous Enigma.
No clue why the mid verse is in Urdu. Since I can follow its fine but what about them those who can't? At least do translate it for others to refer. On whole the piece is flown superbly with a melodious tone.
A fine composition describing beautifully the poetess.
Mixing Urdu with English often confuses me. Still the English portion is nice. I don't know Urdu please.
soul tenderly brightens so divine, so humble Well said dear friend, the soul is like a flower she may seem fragile but bears great promise. Boomwhisperer Ruerd
soul tenderly brightens so divine, so humble Well said dear friend, the soul is like a flower she may seem fragile but bears great promise. Boomwhisperer Ruerd
Many thanks for this Precious Dedication, I appreciate it/ your verses touched Glamorous Enigma, I loved your special words my Friend. Many Thanks/