s.zaynab kamoonpuri

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For Fans Of French. - Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

I tell you of a friend who's fond of everything french
She won't call them 'Frenchies' she can't stand them any offence

Her favorite food french fries and syruped french toast
She's been to lots of 'frenchised' places including Ivory Coast.

She eats à la carte, she dresses à la mode
She claims to reside in some french-doored abode

Her most preferred greens
are buttered french beans
Ah, she loves to frequent, the delicatessen
for french delicacies
and cuisines

And in her chic dinnette
to welcome guests to a french love of feast
the well known words: why yes, bon-appétite!

To follow all french fashions seems to be her raison d'être
She'd crazily sign all her letters sil vous plait

And when she wants to mingle with her french coterie
inviting them over for more of 'bonjour' and 'mérci'
Ah, then she'd appear quite soignée for her soirée
By and by to enhance and enliven her bon-homie.

She wouldn't ever wish me 'safe journey'
She's bound to french-quip it 'bon voyage'.
Once when I said, 'you made a blooper, pal''
Retorted she, 'you mean a faux pas? ''

Non-french variations of anything, to her are boring and passé
but many of her type come sojourning, settling here
Making me wonder then at their immigrations here enmasse
for this land was never a french hold, mademoiselle dear.

Well at times nostalgia does overcome her
Then she fancies having everywhere some déjavu
Gosh once on asking why she had missed a meeting
She snapped her fingers, 'coz you didn't call it a rendezvous.''

If english language vis-à-vis french
she's bound to claim
it's french tis par excellence
I wouldn't know for with french I ain't that au fait
Gosh, if she caught a couple conversing in low tones
she'd be quick to term it, 'aha, that's a tête-a-tête!

She married an old timer
and startled him with her french kiss display
only to abandon him a few months later
to look for a better joie de vivre

Well my friend she does come from
the former french colony of Cotê de Voire
And always to my goodbyes
cheriè she reciprocates with au revoir!
Tis a pity I cant write her a french chef-d'oeuvre
but let all admit french just ain't a bêtenoire.

So though some of this may only be
a figment of my imagination
But it's observing the universal lure of french terms
sure granted me some inspiration.

HOPE u enjoy my bon mot hee hee cherè n cheriés.

Topic(s) of this poem: Art

Comments about For Fans Of French. by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

  • Akhtar Jawad (1/17/2017 10:52:00 PM)

    Yes, I enjoyed this poem, it's a nice poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/1/2015 10:01:00 AM)

    Love this narrative poem. Nicely written and entertaining. (Report) Reply

  • Eugene Levich (9/5/2014 6:29:00 PM)

    Un poème tout à fait charmant et plein d'esprit! (Report) Reply

  • Ayesha Tul Kubra (8/6/2014 6:10:00 PM)

    Although I don't understand the french words you used but the flow of poem is awesomazing :) (Report) Reply

  • Elias Uddin (8/3/2014 3:15:00 AM)

    Tres bien! ! ! ! !
    Je prefere quelque chose francais mais ce ne sont pas mon raison d'etre.........unlike your friend! ! ! ! ! !

    Belle poesie......je l'aime beaucoup....! ! !
    (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (7/12/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    A menu card with delicious cuisine of words that savour the French taste in our lives............ (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (6/25/2014 1:07:00 AM)

    Lovely, flowing poem with a touch of humour. It is seldom seen weaving of words of different language in the original one and creating a wonderful enjoyable creation. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Moto Wa (6/23/2014 9:26:00 PM)

    You can play with words, that is really lovely. Read my poems please. (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2014 12:01:00 PM)

    Very tasty! It is a very good poem! I liked it! (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (6/22/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    I sometimes throw French words in my poems too, but only because I find them in my rhyming dictionary. I don't know what they mean half the time. This poem is like a tasting plate in a French restaurant - much enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Michelle Claus (6/20/2014 3:06:00 PM)

    I adore this poem, and I'm hugging it. My mother is from La Baule, France. Funny you should invite me to read this poem, of all your works. Thank you. I welcome you to visit my Facebook page and view the photo I posted recently. It shows Cote Sauvage, France, and I paired it with my poem, Ocean. Abientot, mon ami. (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2014 10:05:00 AM)

    Original and fun poem, v. enjoyable. Ingenious rhymes. You're being modest about your French ability.Merci, a bientot! (Report) Reply

  • Lee Fones (6/20/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    great poem and thank you for your nice comment on mine: -) (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2014 4:34:00 PM)

    Extremely amusant and plesant to read,
    You did with your talent our sensibility feed,
    Very original poem, a true joy, indeed!

    Merci Beaucoup,
    I really thank you
    (Report) Reply

  • Marisa Eutsler (6/19/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    Belle poésie en effet! well written and expressed. Aimez cette poésie beaucoup (Report) Reply

  • Caleb Gonzales (6/18/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    Really unique and love the flow of it really great (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 17, 2014

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