Graveyard Night=+ Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Graveyard Night=+

Rating: 5.0


Walking the graveyard at the darkest of night
The sound of silence, in my empty soul theres no fright
Looking at the names edged in stone
Hunting for the nameless alone
The fog crawling over the ground
I find that wich they say can't be found
Nealing down, my hands placed on the slate
I lay heavy at the head, not knowing my fait
Watching the clouds hideing the moon
I wonder could this be my tomb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 10 August 2008

very interesting. great job.

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Tyease Collins 15 August 2008

Lovely poem. I love the night hehe. 20/10 ^_^ -Tess C.

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u were right i luv this poem! it's really good dark, sensitive, compleatly rawk awesum lol but anyways good work you've got talentXD

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DELETED NOW 22 August 2008

It's very amusing when poetry sounds like our dreams

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Lesly Dee 24 August 2008

very nice poem my friend. :)

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

Watching the clouds hideing the moon I wonder could this be my tomb great lines to an amazing ending my friend. you rhymed very well in this. very cool poem. good job. Becca

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Viola Grey 09 November 2008

in my mind as I read this I see a vampire searching for a bed for the day...but that's just me...great poem here

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

hey this is a good one.....plz with due regards u have made a few spelling mistakes which spoils the fun..........keep up the good work

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Chocolate Bunny 19 September 2008

I like this one. it was written well.

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Stacey Watts 07 September 2008

Very good poem I loved the element of surprise in the end. Very creative.

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