Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 30,802 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

Gypsy Girl - Poem by Lyn Paul

Her beauty
Like the moon
Like diamonds

She ran from love
Ran from her flesh
That kindness of flesh
Who understood every feeling

Wings of power
Gypsy Girl roam
Roam to the unknown
Fear deep inside only

Smiles hide her fear
Fear exploding in her nurturer
The gentle Gypsy
She know the love is there
But she just keeps running

Such fear
No one is listening to her heart
It is the nurturer
Who can feel her heart

Her door is locked
I cannot get in
I can see
Wings of power
Laughing with her
But they need to hear
Her heart crying

Gypsy Girl
I am here
Hiding no honesty

My heart is raw
My sleep
A rollercoaster
I am knocking
I fear

Gypsy Girl
You shine so bright
You light up a room
Let your heart take you

I am always here
Get off that train
May they listen....
They need to

Copyright Reserved January 12th 2016
Lyn Paul

Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety, hope, love, pain

Comments about Gypsy Girl by Lyn Paul

  • Bri Edwards (7/6/2017 8:11:00 PM)

    a year ago i read and commented. i really don't care for it. let me grab another!

    bri :)
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  • Christopher Tye (3/27/2017 9:08:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, we all want to be able to feel truly free but we rarely are. (Report) Reply

  • Annette Aitken (8/30/2016 12:22:00 PM)

    very interesting can feel the up's and down's as you read..

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/6/2016 10:26:00 AM)

    Beautiful yet painful write. Still many lives may be hidden like Gypsy girl's life. Loved reading from beginning till end. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/12/2016 7:34:00 AM)

    Roam to the unknown! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (6/20/2016 11:48:00 PM)

    i'm with Valsa on this one: Honestly I couldn't catch much! let me read another.

    bri :)
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  • Valsa George (1/19/2016 10:15:00 AM)

    An intriguing write! Honestly I couldn't catch much! Who is this beautiful gypsy girl who hides a lot of fear inside, but doesn't show it out! Is it a projection of your own self? A great write, Lyn! (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2016 6:27:00 AM)

    An interesting read, Lyn. Does the nurterer (parent?) feel a sense of guilt/angst because of her daughter's insecurity, anguish, reticence. I pray this is not a true reflection of your own mother/daughter circumstance. (Report) Reply

  • Aqua Flower (1/15/2016 8:08:00 PM)

    A very intriguing write, kept me on suspense. Written with much heart! A 10! (Report) Reply

  • (1/12/2016 11:27:00 AM)

    (((HUG))) Poor gypsy girl. A beautiful, moving write. (Report) Reply

  • Dimitrios Galanis (1/12/2016 6:42:00 AM)

    You get the impression of something true in life's movement. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/12/2016 12:35:00 AM)

    Written like a free spirit with an open heart (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/11/2016 6:04:00 PM)

    Like diamond moon her beauty shines. Her wings of power are so amazingly laugh with imagery drawn here. Lighting up the room with this power and beauty is interesting.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, January 11, 2016

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