Haiku-4~~ Only My Window Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Haiku-4~~ Only My Window

Rating: 4.7


Haiku-4

Only my window
Mirrors the tranquility
The birds sing songs of mellow.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Haiku-4~~ Only My Window
Saturday, September 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,song,tranquility
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 26 September 2020

Wow for me it is the reverse order as they sit on surrounding trees which are plenty..... Welcome to the world of brevity. in tranquility the birds sing songs of mellow. on others window....

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Rajnish Manga 26 September 2020

You have put it upside down yet the beauty remains undiminished. What an art!

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Rajnish Manga 26 September 2020

One who enjoys this privilege, doesn't have to go after artificial props. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Varsha M 26 September 2020

Birds mellow because they are open to experience and are flexible we humans are rigid and crafty to get our things our way only so tranquility stands out of window wating for it to be invited.

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 September 2020

Through the window glass Mind roaming around nature Peace in the green heart

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2020

Only my window Mirrors the tranquility.... Wonderful confidence of the poet, in her own innocence and poetic aesthetics. But true, only poet is heart can be so confident and so close the nature; fully immersed in its calm quietness.

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Only the good hearted can enjoy the birds songs for they are keen to listen even to the smallest irrespective of their place in the society. Top score

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Anjandev Roy 27 September 2020

Fantastic work.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Sharad Bhatia 26 September 2020

The worst truth of life Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem

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Kostas Lagos 26 September 2020

Caught the moment perfectly!

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