Haiku-7 Poem by Bharati Nayak

We don't have winter here but it is so dreamy under a blanket on a cold morning. Your lovely haiku can be felt anywhere. Thanks for sharing.

nice, bharati. this one took a moment- the connection between mist and blanket. and dreamy- yes- like the foggy or obscured remembrance after waking. -glen

Lovely imagery! Beautifully written haiku.

blanket of mist covering the hills in a sunny winter morning.........nice raw material for a haiku with your poetic skills...

This haiku is well-constructed...your best attempt so far. It does two things at once: 1) concisely presents a scene; 2) sums up an unfolding event. The sleeper savors the last half-waking moments before the day's hurly burly begins. In the time before waking we entertain fanciful notions. This haiku makes me wonder what kind of dreams the land has? If we put ourselves in the land's place, what dreams would we have?

Winter mist covers hills Earth rises to warm sunshine A beautiful haiku.Thank you for sharing this poem 10+++++

A beautiful haiku giving the warm touch of a velvety blanket on the winter heart of a reader. Thanks for the sharing. Regards. Subhas

Bharati! Your delicate touch is so evident in this lovely lovely Haiku! Dreamy in blanket indeed! ! ! Your pen is so perfect, my dear Bharati, it paints images so deftly so perfectly! 10+++++++++++++ Onto my fav list!

Beautiful haiku...........