Haiku- Summer Poem by Valsa George
Haiku- Summer
Sun, ripe citrus fruit
Sapphire sky flecked with clouds
Tarmac road steaming
awesome description of summer Mam, described so much in few words. loved it!
Brilliant write, I felt I was there in summer on that steaming tarmac road as I read your vivid Haiku!
Awesome. Great descriptive skill displayed here. The reader can actually feel the summer heat.
Summers are always beautiful to me for some strange reasons.. Maybe just the afternoon's silence, that is wonderful.. A wonderful haiku Valsa ma'am.. Thank you for sharing..
The imagery used is astounding and greatly reminiscent of rich summer. However, I believe the second line only has 6 syllables. Saf-fire (2) sky(1) fleck-d (1) with (1) clou-ds (1) .
A reading of the poem makes me feel the boiling heat of summer on the earth and the celestial beauty up in the sky
Respecting the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 4:01:06 AM # 1.0.0
Wonderful! Brought back the memory of summer.