Haiku- Spring Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- Spring

Rating: 5.0


Dandelions sprout
The Earth in green mantle clad
Birds on trees warble

Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 06 February 2016

A perfect description of the rebirth that is spring

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Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2016

These lines give a sense of rejuvenation n rebirth. And that's what spring is all about.

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M Asim Nehal 14 February 2016

Nice one I liked......10++++

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Mark Heathcote 14 February 2016

Nice one I luck forward to some warmer days to come!

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Mihaela Pirjol 19 November 2018

Nothing is more invigorating than the season of Spring! This well-composed haiku has encapsulated the feeling of Spring beautifully!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2017

It is a beautiful poem on nature having stunning expression though it is on concise.

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Souren Mondal 16 February 2016

It rejuvinates not only the mind, but the soul too.. We should all be grateful to Mother Nature for her gifts to us human.. A wonderful haiku Valsa ma'am.. Thank you for sharing...

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2016

As nature displays its own beauty. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 February 2016

A beautiful picture painted in only three lines, the three basic colors, but a reader's imagination sees a rainbow.

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