Haiku (You Are With Me) Poem by Rajnish Manga
Haiku (You Are With Me)
You are with me- I say
But on second thought I discover
You are not with me.
There is always doubt and confusion in mind. But relationship is pure ever. This is a very beautiful poem shared here.10
You have very nicely reviewed the poem. Thanks a lot, Kumarmani Sir.
A puzzle so well portrayed......interesting haiku
Nice haiku on the poem theme. Many relationships lack the required mutual understanding 10+
No body is perfect, one may be partly with you but may not be completely with you.
This story is as old as human kind, very well put Rajnish. We are all looking for connection outside when the only lasting connection is within us. Wonderful haiku. Food for reflection.10
Thank you, Norah, for visiting the poem and sharing your views with regard to its theme.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:01:00 AM # 1.0.0
Wonderful Haiku.................................................10+++ Please check the second line for syllables.
Thanks for your lovely comments and also for correcting me.