Halcyon World Comments

Poetic minds think alike Val. Joseph and I are booking our tickets. Lovely form and perfect rhyme as usual.

Hi Really liked your poem.I'd like to go to that world.Also thanks for your comments on my poem I although not beautiful.Gillian

this i found to be romantic and fantastical

Another trip to realms beautiful, beyond all cares and pestering worries of the world on tireless wings of imagination! ! Enjoy all your rides! ! Perfect rhyme and unobstructed flow! !

Nice rhyme scheme, perfect flow, as you take us along into your vivid imagination world, thanks for the ride....

Another masterpiece Val.

A fabulous fairy tale of beatiful words - setting all of our senses free. Thank You Val

A trip of high spirits and near gravity free, skirting stars and distant a seas, a fine write and a very noble and gentle and enticing idea.

A wonderful and vivid imagination of the Halcyon world with the lovers gliding in is so exhilarating !

reading for the second time. yes I will go along for the ride.

Can we leave soon, my time is running out. You have a vivid an beautiful imagination. A great escape write

it's all about rhythm, beats, and meaningfulness... a musical write!

travelling to the worlds unknown, every rock and every stone. beautiful lines. beautiful poem. :)

I'm right there with you most the time.

sounds like a great ride, may I join you also. nice poem for today

Come with me, let’s take a ride Oh, what a ride it is that you take us all as we follow you. Beautiful poem into realms of eternity. Thank you.

You took me on a journey Val, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.

I'll come with you, absolutely! I wouldn't miss it for anything! . Thoroughly enjoyed this great poem!

Traveled, musicality Oh what verses, To feel free Carried me away, really enjoyed light and beautiful, like in a dream. thanks

A really wonderful poem, reminds me of when I used to read about astral projection. A really great write.