Home
is what widens between
the two heart- beats
whose decree is to leave
everything outside,
the insides
are never seen
though doorless
sunk as it is in dreams
in the other sunken life.
As always a great piece of poetry! I missed your poetry for very long Sir. The real home is so well defined here. Yes, what's home without loving hearts and happiness...not mere bricks and cement. Bravo Sir
home filled with happiness, joy and plenty of love, built with to care to share with our near and dear, for the long lasting relationship, awesome poem, speaks the truth, thanks for the invitation dear poet, enjoyed reading it, keep posting
a home is where mind's roof beam, roofed with tranquillity. Excellent imaginative faculties, the poet has!
where real want alone fulfils a hundred desires without any desire on its part, ................i don't understand. and i think you 'want' fulfills, not fulfils. easy mistake! maybe i would add a couple of commas, but i did enjoy the flow and the spirit of the poem. it reminds me of an 'old saying': Home is where the heart is. [i think heart, not hearth] i assume a good heart is meant; there are plenty of bad hearts to make bad or no homes. ; ( to MyPoemList. yes, this was interesting. thanks. bri :)
The beauty of home has splendidly been defined. Sunk as it is in dreams in other sunken life. Marvellous
What a beautiful concept! Home is what widens between the two hear-beats. A lovely poem
Magnificent write. Very profound in sense. Thank u. Anjandev Roy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great piece of poetry. where friendship is a daily guest. Enjoyed reading it!