I Don'T Want To Be Down Forever Poem by Obed dela Cruz
I Don'T Want To Be Down Forever
On my feet I will stand
With wings spread, I will hover fast
And fly high. I don’t want to be a loser,
But a winner, so I will soar.
Reaching the sun and hitting the goal,
Reaching the big blue sky and having the prize.
I don’t want to be down forever
I don’t want to be a coward.
I don’t want to be chicken that flies too low.
I will soar and fly high.
I will lower my pride and be humble.
To do this, I must ask grace from the mighty One who sees me.
Like an eagle, I will fly higher than clouds.
I will soar high, I will succeed in life.
Copyright © 2009 by Obed Dela Cruz
(To use this poem in a legal way, you could email me at [email protected] but of course, you cannot own the poem because it violates some of the law of informations systems and copyright)
(July 21,2009; Marikina City; 5: 10PM)
what a determination to reach the skies, , , u will touch it....good work 10
wow....a hubble poem of wish....that's a good mind set.....very positive and God is the center of hope.....perfect dream of truth and God as part of plan of life....God bless.....a 10 +
a good determination...a nice ambition...well written... (Just don't go down abruptly as it hurts...do it steps by steps to high up and slowly to go down..)
Faith and confidence goes together...nice and lovely poem! ! ! Thanks.......
amazing poem. that's the best spirit to have when the going gets tough
a really uplifting poem. the first verse especially fills one with the joy of stretching, reaching. using feet, wings and heart to catch your dream.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:02:49 AM # 1.0.0
Forever you will be a winner, hovering up in the sky. Interesting piece.