If You Forget It Won't Come Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

If You Forget It Won't Come

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these all were the paths
went away to the endless edge of the heart

these all were the gilded paths
under the black-white clouds
with the dawn autumnal breeze

these all were the paths
of the bed of maple leaves, red rose petals
with the newborn baby spike-grasses

these all were paths
with the untold wandering
by hearing the warm greeting songs of tailor birds

these all were paths
of the silent rhythm of whispering
among the thick green forestry trees

oh; gone away,
gone away now these all paths are,
the oblivion mind has rubbed out,
the forgetfulness has removed all

o no, no,
won't come back
the smiling happy love
to these eradicated paths
as like before.......



-July 07,2019 Chattogram

Monday, July 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: forget,lost love,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 08 July 2019

Wonderful images have created feelings that will not be forgotten.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2019

Gilded paths of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 July 2019

u sir r now climbing.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 July 2019

Wonderful poem with an excellent ending.........................................................10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 July 2019

IF U stop reading me ARRETARRET IN FRENCHY the u will be forgetting me so now I say do not STOP read read no arrey arrey pl MB

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Anjandev Roy 21 July 2019

the smiling happy love.........beautiful. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 20 July 2019

excellent images- but I really got fixated on this- - > oh; gone away, gone away now these all paths are, the oblivion mind has rubbed out, the forgetfulness has removed all

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C F 15 July 2019

Lost paths and lost love.... nice poem, touching write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 July 2019

A poignant and heartfelt write. It expresses in beautiful poetic detail of the memories gathered by two hearts. Very touching and wonderfully written.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 July 2019

A flood of images after a burst of nostalgic cloud, feelingly written.

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