In Fields Of Blue Poem by Valerie Dohren
In Fields Of Blue
In fields of blue I long to dwell
And frolic ‘neath the sun -
To mingle with the scented air
With each new day begun
Then yet to float within the mist
That lingers all around -
Be as a wraith, to drift and spin,
Above the rugg'ed ground
No substance to my earthly form
Nor weight to bear me down
As then I yearn to twist and turn
Draped in a silken gown
Be thus my senses unconfined
Within a mortal frame
Untethered from all things that own -
So like a dancing flame
To see and hear, to touch, inspire
The perfume of a rose -
Such fragrance sweet as angel`s breath
Diffusing as it grows
Then with the spirits of the land
My heart would so rejoice -
To ever chant their gentle lay
As in a single voice
So sing, O Shining Ones*, yes sing
Of joy, of hope, of love,
And I, with thee, will render thus
Sweet music from above
In fields of blue I long to dwell
My dreams abiding there -
Forever dancing through all time
With flowers in my hair
* Devas (nature spirits) .
I felt the beat and rhythm as i read through those lines....simply refreshing. Thanks.
I love the opening stanza.. and the joy is like dancing in the air, by the step of fumes waltz...you done a beautiful poem, well done again Valerie! _Soul
not a single beat has missed its rhythm...very balanced poem...
An excellent rhyming poem mirroring the beauty of the wonderful nature, exemplifying the victory of the spirit over the senses.Very enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes.
what a rhythm plus the rhyming, , , , , me a fan now, , , , , , , keep writing, , ,
Oh to write with such words of beauty! I bend at knee, and remove my old hat in your honor, for truly you are a real and pure poet. I can find no other words nearly good enough...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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What a free spirit you must be. This is ever so sweet. Thank You