Introspection-06 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Introspection-06

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a seed
sacrifices itself existence
to sprout a tree
silently

a womb
conceives an embryo
silently

it's a process of creation

but, if you cut the tree
if you kill the people
it will make noise

it's a process of destruction

-(said by the wise)

o dear Junoon
love is very painful
where hate is apparently beautiful

I know
you love the entire creations
if you want to enjoy your love
tears will make an ocean;
cause some of the creations allow you
where some of them disallow you;

but you necessitate endurance all
tolerate their likings, disliking, collaring out
cause your love for the equivalent

o dear Junoon
annihilate your biased intelligence,
eradicate your prejudiced belief,
don't make the hate an apron for your eternal soul,
make your extermination the virtuous path of love

know it that-
your love is your enlightening thought
where your love will be other's God,
your love is your death
where your love will be others life,
your love is your insight
where your love will others heavenly path

yes, o dear Junoon
annihilate yourself in pure love
to make the enlightened, united path
for the next coming fellow the bright



-July 05,2019 Chattogram

Friday, July 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: introspection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 05 July 2019

So imaginative dear Poet.

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Kostas Lagos 05 July 2019

Extraordinary piece of work! Well written my friend

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2019

Another poem of great depth. Perceptiive, powerful and thought provoking write. I like how the process of creation and destruction has been distinguished in this wonderful poem. A deep and unique analysis.

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Susan Williams 15 July 2019

searching one's soul is not often if at all done by the foolish but done daily by the wise- -very good topic Mahtab

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 July 2019

Introspection is the key, Soul searching is the way, More answers lie within than without, A well penned piece.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 July 2019

Only with pure love! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 July 2019

A brilliant work my friend! Extremely well penned..................................................10

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Nosheen Irfan 07 July 2019

An inspiring n enlightening write. Humanity is the greatest virtue. Introspection leads to the annihilation of base instincts and nurtures noble thoughts. Full of wisdom and common sense. A must read.

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