Leave Me Alone Poem by Amy

Leave Me Alone

Rating: 2.9


Go
Leave me alone
Yeah you heard me. You
took part of my life i'll never
get back.
Thief!
and for that I say
Go, Leave me alone
Do you understand me?
You played your part, and let
me say it was very convinving
Well the curtain is down so
Go leave me alone
do I make myself clear? ! I have
had it with the stories- a natural
if you ask me, but seeing as I
don't care anymore
I'm asking as nicely as possible
Go Leave me alone
........................................................
Wait, Please stay!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 02 February 2018

Amy, such a good poem...congrats for being chosen...10+++

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Tom Allport 02 February 2018

a poem of indecision and how we show our emotions? ..............well penned Amy

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Nika Mcguin 02 February 2018

Very innovative! I love your use of punctuation here to add emphasis. What I love even more - as others have said below - is that this poem is a realistic depiction of just how erratic and indecisive love can make us. Great write, and a well deserved poem of the day.

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Babatunde Aremu 02 February 2018

A poem written with experience of regretted action. Moral lesson: Think it out before you decide to avoid regret. Kudos to the poet.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2018

Amy, I was rooting for you all the way! And then that last line! Very clever! Perhaps tragic.

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Suzy Marebra 02 February 2018

I know what you mean, good poem.

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James Mclain 02 February 2018

Amy, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2018

Pain! ! Stain! The curtain is down. Writing out your heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Savita Tyagi 02 February 2018

Go away! Oh no please stay! We rock on that swing day and night! Great expressions. Congratulations.

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Valentin Savin 02 February 2018

Well penned. Wow, what a poetic monologue. I loved it and I mean to translate it into the Russian language. Thanks in advance.

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