Lice Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Lice

Rating: 5.0


Lice perch in the hair
Sometimes they want to show off
They cling on collars.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin,All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 18 June 2020

So much lice becomes a trouble. Enjoyed the fun.

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Kostas Lagos 19 June 2020

It is starting to itch...Great poem!

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Anjandev Roy 19 June 2020

Brilliant haiku......thank u. anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 June 2020

A well crafted haiku. Simply amazing....10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 June 2020

Muse of the lice in the hair! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 03 February 2021

Oh Rose don't remind. They are pain in neck

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Soran M. H 05 August 2020

Oh my Dear, They cling on collars too.

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Soran M. H 05 August 2020

Lice is very rare theme, this poem shows how humble poet you are, you always trying to sing for poor people, who doesn't get enough care by the others including the officials, I like your poem and I have enjoyed it...10/10 and into my treasure chest

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2020

I didn't know that lice are so vain VAIN? ! I have terrible itching here! Oops, they're already showing off here....itchy lices, little itchy lices.... Enormous enjoyable poem, dear Mrs. Juan Austin, what a joy! Like rev. Bernard responded: Simply amazing 10++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 June 2020

I agree with Anjandev...this is absolutely a brilliant haiku! Thanks for sharing.....10++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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