Miles away…your voices drifting
Far away…your crying milling
Apocalypse now…or never
The night is still freezing
Without you sleeping…
With me…craving
Tell me to my eyes
I’ll pay for the price
Should I come over?
To live with you my lover
We tie the knot
We fill the slot
Promises are here to stay
Every second I’d pray
Between two points
We toss the coin
Head or tail
Anything will prevail
You steal my heart
Impossible to depart
I want you so bad
Thinking of you like mad
I bow to your request
To serve you at best
It’s a kind of magic
Your love is majestic
Sweet heavenly juices
You produce from luscious
I drink it all
Out of night brawl
Please return me the favor
Be my wife forever
very nice poem that show how love can be some times confusing.not knowing what to do.i like it alot.
Good. I think the more one is affected of something, the more beautiful is the way the emotions / words / poem comeout.
Ahh, the long distance relationship. Loving from afar, no easy task. Stirs a mix of emotions. Very well written.
nice peice...very good. the last line is..a little off, but it's a cool poem. well wrote.
I Sulaiman i think that this poem is very lovely one, on the one to ten chart i would give you ten plus 10+ for such outstanding work you should post more poem to me i think your poems have me at your footsteps. Love Chevelle
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a great poem for proposal. cheers