*** Love You Tender *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** Love You Tender ***

Rating: 3.9


Miles away…your voices drifting
Far away…your crying milling
Apocalypse now…or never
The night is still freezing
Without you sleeping…
With me…craving

Tell me to my eyes
I’ll pay for the price
Should I come over?
To live with you my lover
We tie the knot
We fill the slot
Promises are here to stay
Every second I’d pray
Between two points
We toss the coin
Head or tail
Anything will prevail
You steal my heart
Impossible to depart
I want you so bad
Thinking of you like mad
I bow to your request
To serve you at best
It’s a kind of magic
Your love is majestic
Sweet heavenly juices
You produce from luscious
I drink it all
Out of night brawl
Please return me the favor
Be my wife forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maya Crisol 16 January 2009

a great poem for proposal. cheers

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

very nice poem that show how love can be some times confusing.not knowing what to do.i like it alot.

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Ashok Kumar 22 December 2008

Good. I think the more one is affected of something, the more beautiful is the way the emotions / words / poem comeout.

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 18 December 2008

I loved it.A very very romantic poem10 for this

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Rachel The Hair Guru 16 December 2008

Ahh, the long distance relationship. Loving from afar, no easy task. Stirs a mix of emotions. Very well written.

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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

A very nice, romantic poem.. Thanks..

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a loving tender poem, , passionated feelings

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Dead Poettess 27 April 2009

very influencial verse....keep it up..

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Dolan Doran 06 March 2009

nice peice...very good. the last line is..a little off, but it's a cool poem. well wrote.

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Chevelle Reid 22 January 2009

I Sulaiman i think that this poem is very lovely one, on the one to ten chart i would give you ten plus 10+ for such outstanding work you should post more poem to me i think your poems have me at your footsteps. Love Chevelle

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