Loyal Oblation Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Loyal Oblation

Rating: 4.0


Master, passed away
Silence obeying, dumb in shocked
Loyal to coffin!

-December 03,2018

Loyal Oblation
Wednesday, December 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreaking,image,loyalty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written on heartbreaking image shows George H.W. Bush's service dog "SULLY" lying next to the 41st President's coffin in Houston on Sunday, December 02,2018
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 December 2018

DOGS are more sad than human When my pop died his 7 dogs accompanied to the funera/cremationl many human guys dropped out

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2018

Life and death! ! To be born and to die one day. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 December 2018

Mahtab, such a touching poem.............10++++++++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 December 2018

SECOND VISIT MY SALAAAMS

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Akhtar Jawad 19 December 2018

A touching short poem, well wrote Nahtab.

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Kostas Lagos 18 December 2018

You described this incident so nicely! Loved it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

Yes dogs feel the loss and you have pictured that well and superbly in touching words of elegy like poetry. Thumbs up. Soo nice to read from your inking again pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2018

Touching expression! A short but yet highly expressive poem! Thanks for sharing.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 December 2018

I also read this news item as many others must have, But you alone were moved to pen a poem, and a beautiful at that, Good, you shared it with us.

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