I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning,
The dew drops are comforting my feet,
I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.
I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence,
I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice,
The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.
Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass,
Opening my eyes i saw above the sky,
There was your face among the clouds smiling,
I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky.
I'm gonna miss you all the days of life,
And even when death will take my last breath,
Last thing i'll do passing to eternity,
I'm gonna miss you.
Winter will come, grass will fall asleep,
I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore,
Only my memories with you will be always alive,
Rustling in my mind as grass did.
Kind of above a comment- sets one in the mood for silence, and being enveloped in the grass and somebody's dulcet voice.
Beautiful poetic expression! Lyrical, and spiritual as well! Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass - feel the same way! Congratulations on your poem being chosen as POD!
I like the way the poems ends, 'Winter will come, grass will fall asleep, I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore, Only my memories with you will be always alive, Rustling in my mind as grass did. Lovely imagination.
This poem abounds with powerful imagery...congratulations Cristina!
Quite a heartening poem of love, beautiful and bright. Loved reading. Well done.
A beautiful love poem. Heartiest congratulations to Christina Teodor on her poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! 'Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass' - love this line and agree to it.
Touched by everything that witnessed her lost love silently the poetess breaks her silence by such a nice touching poem. Congrats!
Very well scripted with love, hope and eternity and with nature how it looks amazing and calming.....well expressed.....10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence, I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice, The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind, Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice......haunting expression. A brilliant poem on love, magic and nature has been astutely delineated. Thanks and congratulations.