Friday, September 12, 2014

Memories! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Few Memories were written
In sands of shore
Though tides of time went wiping by
But it sank deep down my heart.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2022

I burry bitter memories evey midnight... beautiful approach to life

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Heather Wilkins 11 October 2014

thanks dear Geetha for reading and commenting on my poems I appreciate you so much love and happiness always heather happy writing

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Piyush Dey 05 October 2014

wow, it was a wonderful read. so simply and thoughtfully written. nice write.

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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2014

why do I hang on to the past so deep why can't I see myself in the mirror memories are to be cherished forever

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Paul Sebastian 01 October 2014

Great write of one who has been shackled to the past of bitter memories. The past is buried and gone but the present is here to be lived. This poem inspire one to live in the present and not sit in the rocking chair of the past. Enjoyed it.

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Kee Thampi 25 September 2014

when we walk to the shore of love and dreaming for lovely soul of this nature... Bitter Memories were to be buried alive Though they were of dead past I buried it everyday at midnight But the very next sunrise I carried it alive with me.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 24 September 2014

beautifully written, dear poetess... Sweet memories like the sunshine if no shine it become dark and it seems bitter ........... but truly you realize all

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Om Chawla 22 September 2014

How very true. It is indeed very difficult to get rid of the bitter memories howsoever we may wish so. Beautifully written.

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Dinesan Madathil 18 September 2014

A high degree of personal involvement into the craft of this poem makes it a remarkable write from you Geetha. What that makes life is our futile attempts to forget the past and dive deep into an unknown future in search of a resort made of marbles and bubbles clustered..... A good poem that demands a 10 from me..

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Rajesh Thankappan 16 September 2014

Rightly said. The past entangles with the present and sullies it. Loved the poem thoroughly.

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 14 September 2014

So true. I do this too. Hanging on to the moth eaten fragile dead past.....hopelessness is all that it breeds. Beautifully penned.loved it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2014

Bitter memories keep haunting till some happy moments keep erasing them ever so slowly. Beautiful poem with great expression. Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 September 2014

make me realize where these past have left me in present? one must realize well crafted most of us suffered or will suffer take a preventive measure Thank you Geetha

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Valsa George 13 September 2014

Bitter Memories were to be buried alive Though they were of dead past I buried it everyday at midnight But the very next sunrise I carried it alive with me. Though we bury them deep down, sometimes they resurrect giving us pain and wetting our eyes! A poem of remarkable beauty Geetha!

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Lyn Paul 12 September 2014

So beautifully written Geetha. I believe to move it is about planning new things, friendships, helping others and remembering that our journey here is only short. x

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 September 2014

Bitter- sweet memories of past pushing us to live in present...........Geetha...........very nicely composed

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Dr. Ravipal Bharshankar 12 September 2014

Nice! Just see...you are in present.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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