He fervidly inspects he's surely distracted
His mind and soul are unevenly distributed
His corporal self rests in a roseless bed
His brain meanders around her shed
In one ear, he listens to her sweet whisper
Another ear gets him the song of despair
It was a divorce they signed each other
But it was a whimsical accord sure!
They are sunk in the same river
Different directions they flow forever
They have chosen sundry journey
Hard to endure their ill-fated meeting
His bloods on sands and corpse in river
His empty mind laments in despair!
Ink is spilt, the pen can't hold
Hard to see a hidden mold
Copyright @ Dillip
Very sad Dillip I hope yr friend finds happiness
" In one ear, he listens to her sweet whisper Another ear gets him the song of despair " very poignant picture..
2) after marriage, each will realise that he /she is not married to the designer girl/boy he/she had met befo
Love is blind, they say. When in love, one notices everything good about the other, but does not notice anything otherwise. It is as if a designer girl meets a designer boy..
If you survive the beginning, you usually survive. But I guess sometimes divorce becomes inevitable. Thoughtful write! I am sure your friend will like it.
I wonder how people can separate after years and years together. The beginning of marriage is the hardest
Your brilliant pen has addressed a sad situation, with beauty and compassion.5 stars.
A very interesting story, but with a sad ending. Such a shame to break the marriage, it turns out they still love each other. Beautiful poem Dr. Swain. Top Marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
This is really sad. Sometimes opinions differ and couples have to take extreme step. Nicely written.