He fervidly inspects he's surely distracted
His mind and soul are unevenly distributed
His corporal self rests in a roseless bed
His brain meanders around her shed
In one ear, he listens to her sweet whisper
Another ear gets him the song of despair
It was a divorce they signed each other
But it was a whimsical accord sure!
They are sunk in the same river
Different directions they flow forever
They have chosen sundry journey
Hard to endure their ill-fated meeting
His bloods on sands and corpse in river
His empty mind laments in despair!
Ink is spilt, the pen can't hold
Hard to see a hidden mold
Copyright @ Dillip
Love is blind, they say. When in love, one notices everything good about the other, but does not notice anything otherwise. It is as if a designer girl meets a designer boy..
2) after marriage, each will realise that he /she is not married to the designer girl/boy he/she had met befo
" In one ear, he listens to her sweet whisper Another ear gets him the song of despair " very poignant picture..
Being a Lawyer I am destined to see many couples got separated and many children lost either father or mother through the separation of their parents. A rare poem with high calibrated emotions stuck with it. Exasperatingly brilliant write depicting the horrors of divorce. .
If you survive the beginning, you usually survive. But I guess sometimes divorce becomes inevitable. Thoughtful write! I am sure your friend will like it.
I wonder how people can separate after years and years together. The beginning of marriage is the hardest
Your brilliant pen has addressed a sad situation, with beauty and compassion.5 stars.
A very interesting story, but with a sad ending. Such a shame to break the marriage, it turns out they still love each other. Beautiful poem Dr. Swain. Top Marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful ode to the friend