On A Planet Since 2018 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

On A Planet Since 2018

Rating: 4.5


White morning, winter coolness showered me
Silent around, sought I- peaceful station
Net threads brought to wealthy-healthy planet
Web, worldwide wrapped, by name poem hunter
Stoppage, for a life, embarked I'm here, breathe
Unique planet, with the crucial whole thing

First month of year, since fortnight of its day
For love, true sketch, to follow wisdom ink
Started with straight word- "For You" was the first
"A Love" engrossed me within sacred thought
Verse after verse, hugged the hand of sole pen
(Bangla -English total Four, Eight and Six)
Four Hundred Eighty Six wings in flying
Twenty six wings not in active show case

In my writing in this planet I've got
Love, in happy-sorrow and in great-small
Through thick-thin walks it and good-bad at all
Summers, rainy seasons, autumns all come
Dewy autumns, winters, springs come also
Black with white, white with black come to live long
North, south, east, west akin feeling of world
Writers, poets, poetess, thinkers as one
Thoughts, creeds, wisdom, writings- godly blessing
Theist, atheist concern for welfare

This planet cares me as mother for child
Shows me the unite path for which I'm here
Helps me to think about self thousands time
Helps me to walk on the insane to sane
Helps to love all without hatred, vengeance
Helps, how to deal out roses without thorns
Thanks a lot to this planet and this year

Welcome to this planet, expose yourself
Search and find, golden age here for long life
Look into its eyes, hearts and souls, be cheers
You will find what you mean to its true race
Poem Hunter Dot Com for all writers



-December 05,2018 Chattogram

Wednesday, December 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"For You" was my debut writing, submitted on January 15,2018 in this literary site.

Dedicated to POEMHUNTER.COM and all honorable poets and poetesses of this esteemed literary web site
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 05 December 2018

An excellent poem Mahtab!

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M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

Superb poem to all of us, we reciprocate our good wishes to you. Together we make this PH a successful platform for some good literally work.

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M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

Superb poem to all of us, we reciprocate our good wishes to you. Together we make this PH a successful platform for some good literally work.10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2018

In my writing in this planet I've got Love, in happy-sorrow and in great-small Through thick-thin walks it and good-bad at all.....beautiful poetic expression! Very well penned my friend...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

White morning is the winter morning. A nice dedicated poem to Poem Hunter is beautifully and excellently penned with wise imagery.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2018

This planet cares me as mother for child Shows me the unite path for which I'm here Helps me to think about self thousands time...this is a beautiful poem my dear Mahtabji. i felt honoured to be a part o f Poemhunter.........as i read your lines.. thank u for all the words that you have beautifully penned in this poem. tony

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Fiadh Fida 14 December 2018

PoemHunter is your that written planet, wonderfully penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2018

Blue Planet! ! Welcome to this planet. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2018

A nice imagery, a wonderful poem.

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Muzahidul Reza 06 December 2018

White morning, winter coolness showered me Silent around, sought I- peaceful station fantastic description, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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