when the dreams die on..
am I seeing a new beam?
is it a treat of nature..
like something to make ourselves nurture?
is it a sign from within depth,
to hold ourselves on a faith?
saying that we are ever eternal..
and not to be too fast to make it a final?
as a streak that substantial we are here,
and having no power to wade it all in any fear!
we stay here as long as as we have to..,
to make all the deals in all their fertile ways to get to!
is it the power of nature again..against us,
repeatedly telling us to not to make a fuss!
wonder why we often fail of this truth..,
even when we feel it often in our depths of Hearts!
why not we tend to submit to this all,
to make the nature of it all to work for itself?
copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)
Siddarth Montik, This was a great descriptive explanation of the connection we feel with the natural world around us. I can identify with your poem. I liked the line, Is it a sign within depths to hold ourselves in faith. Beautiful poem sir! ..............Loved it. blessings to you. Kathy
Thank you Kathy Van Kurin! yes Kathy we need to have utmost respect to Nature! Thanks!
Very nice Sir..... We all are here to play the roles given to us by the lord......all the jobs we do because of the demanding nature...
is it a sign from within depth, to hold ourselves on a faith? , nature is vast, we all are in nature, we are effected by it, nature is reflected on us, ....... well written, thanks for sharing the poem with us
you have a wonderful way of words... This is also a beautiful poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is an inalienable bond between man and Nature.....! When our hopes are shattered, Nature sends a beam of light into our darkened lives! it gives the message that we shouldn't get puzzled by the challenges of life, but overcome them as best as we can! Pay heed to what Nature tells us! Lofty thoughts!
a humble bow to you Poet Valsa George for your beautiful comment and understanding! ! I BOW again Siddartha me!