Remedy Poem by Unwritten Soul

Very profound. I have found that when one overwhelms ears that do not hear with too many words, with words that pour out like floods, the effect is like drowning a parched plant with far too much water. A great poem..

Beautiful.... and wise. You handled the combination of love and beauty and wisdom with a very deft pen- each part did not subtract from another part, all blended together with poetic ease. Well done! ! ! 10

A thought provoking write. Going through this poem I memorize a proverb 'Too much of any thing is good for nothing.' Too much of water spoils the plants like the flood does. Hence proper care should be taken. A drop of water is most important. Further much care sometimes creates fear that one can't enjoy beauty. Beauty will only be missed when its gone. We should take care of how much things we giving, till enough of hands to handle. Dear Soul, you have painted this poem astutely and hauntingly. I like most lines are... Because my care for you is expensive As if it is water in desert ...but i always ready to offer Like a well that always full Many thanks for posting this gem.

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Beauty will be missed when its gone. Very well said. Too much of water can kill the plants. Care should be there only upto needed and not a drop beyond that. One of the facts maybe we learn later. This break us apart from inside. I loved each worthy lines that is part of our life. Thought provoking write.

Beautiful message conveyed through equally exquisite images.Thanks for sharing☺

It's a very fine image about care, theover-watering. Yes, I really like this poem. It has to go in my favourites