Rise From The Ashes Poem by Unwritten Soul

Rise From The Ashes

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Sent to the earth In the open light
White soul delivered out from the dark
Guardian of a pure heart, run in innocent blood
Owned the spirit like a young phoenix learn to fly
Underneath the skin it binds, fears existence denied
But when the sun loose it's crown at the dark night
Mist of fear shadowing all visible roads
Suffering without heat to breathe cold

Consuming air from this atmosphere
Holding soul in frozen blood, away from frozen heart
Taking over sanity to absorb all energy of living
Numb all the strength till wings lost the last flames
The glory now fade away soon to disappear
All broken, burned by this cold fear just in one night
And released spirit moved out as despaired soot
Force the soul to vapor above the ashes crude
Left the rest wait to collapse on the ground
Hopes estranged, decayed in the ashes

Purified soul levitates between the earth and the sky
Like a mass of white cotton, now it keeps growing
Filtering air to embrace all scattering black dust
The spirit particles, to not gone in black space
Emerge In anew constitution, an invisible union,
Unison for two, back as a whole one again
Sown by lightning, ties them together
In a mega black cloud above the ashes
A restoration of fearless,
Mission to save the life grace

A shiny drop, hit the ground
The purest ardor in the gem of soul
Return to the ashes as a brave dew
A spark was created, life ignited
Drizzle bring more, in every drip drop
Bring the heats, poured as the rain fall
Towering fires, Igniting sensation
Celebrating of new rising life
The return of the soul and spirit
For the heart lend the pulses again
Breathing confident
To raise the flamed wings again
Behind the limb
Like burning fires
Like a phoenix reclaim dreams
From lost life in earth and return again
After one more time delivered from dark
To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise
Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
about the poem:
Is the same title of my collection of 'rise from the ashes' theme..
The idea was came when i imagined if the the our strength get purified like rain process and return into the ashes...and each droplet (soul+spirit) be like a fuel to re ignite the ashes/ember and make them in fire again to rise as like phoenix, bird of fire...to fight all dreams and obstacle, coz...we once was born in fearless child but we lose it when we learn and face life threats..back to innocent sometimes can bring us something good...
The new theme will follow after this poem before it continue with other same theme soon! _Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 14 March 2012

A soul stirring poem with Zeal and Zest with spirit and soul I hear the cry of your soul yet there hope in this poem of yours. I love reading the poem like child who by-hearts tables.... These line caught my breath and fancy..... Taking over sanity to absorb all energy of living Numb all the strength till wings lost the last flames An Amazing poem by the SOUL so I give her, I favorite flowers - a daisy! A cripes, you may write many like this

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Whisperkwane Lamb 06 March 2012

Meaning: yours: Like a phoenix reclaim dreams From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise Like the world in the begining from nothing to something as love grows it shows...you have touched my soul again...let it never end...a burst of fire...purifies one into believeing how great a darkness can be...turnnel vision sees more from a hearts pionts of view, as did you sayFrom lost life in earth and return again a new begining how wonderful is God's creation (you) woman for a man's spirit to be set a fire...you have good taste as a writer, please continue to please the heart and minds of many...thank you...

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Wahab Abdul 25 February 2012

''Sent to the earth In the open light White soul delivered out from the dark'' yes! white soul delivered from the dark--from the unknown or from the innocent.......this is a very good saying, i like it very much, an excellent poem.pls read my new poem.

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(De Va) 22 February 2012

to be shown your vision is wonderful....I see my own soul sailing in the midst of darkness, I find my travels are not alone, as I emerge from the ashes time and time again...blessings

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Jacqui Broad 22 February 2012

Amazing. It really captures you, Soul. Now I see and understand clearly. Truly beautiful my friend.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 May 2018

The return of the soul and spirit For the heart lend the pulses again Breathing confident To raise the flamed wings again Behind the limb Like burning fires Like a phoenix reclaim dreams From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise.......impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Mj Lemon 17 July 2017

Something rises, and not merely awakens. We can be awake, yet remain trapped. There must be a reason, a source, a hope, even an object that guides aspirations. A great poem, Soul.

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Jahan Zeb 18 November 2012

This is meaningful. Innocent lost in maturity. The more mature the more we are anxious. I like your powerful similes and the language of the poem suits the message. Well done Soul

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Terry O'leary 26 August 2012

Very nice poem. Reincarnating throughout all eternity would be wonderful... Terry

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Neela Nath Das 17 May 2012

Philosophical poem.Your explanation is so lucid that the theme becomes crystal clear.Nice write!

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