Rise From The Ashes Poem by Unwritten Soul
Rise From The Ashes
Sent to the earth In the open light
White soul delivered out from the dark
Guardian of a pure heart, run in innocent blood
Owned the spirit like a young phoenix learn to fly
Underneath the skin it binds, fears existence denied
But when the sun loose it's crown at the dark night
Mist of fear shadowing all visible roads
Suffering without heat to breathe cold
Consuming air from this atmosphere
Holding soul in frozen blood, away from frozen heart
Taking over sanity to absorb all energy of living
Numb all the strength till wings lost the last flames
The glory now fade away soon to disappear
All broken, burned by this cold fear just in one night
And released spirit moved out as despaired soot
Force the soul to vapor above the ashes crude
Left the rest wait to collapse on the ground
Hopes estranged, decayed in the ashes
Purified soul levitates between the earth and the sky
Like a mass of white cotton, now it keeps growing
Filtering air to embrace all scattering black dust
The spirit particles, to not gone in black space
Emerge In anew constitution, an invisible union,
Unison for two, back as a whole one again
Sown by lightning, ties them together
In a mega black cloud above the ashes
A restoration of fearless,
Mission to save the life grace
A shiny drop, hit the ground
The purest ardor in the gem of soul
Return to the ashes as a brave dew
A spark was created, life ignited
Drizzle bring more, in every drip drop
Bring the heats, poured as the rain fall
Towering fires, Igniting sensation
Celebrating of new rising life
The return of the soul and spirit
For the heart lend the pulses again
Breathing confident
To raise the flamed wings again
Behind the limb
Like burning fires
Like a phoenix reclaim dreams
From lost life in earth and return again
After one more time delivered from dark
To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise
Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise
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Is the same title of my collection of 'rise from the ashes' theme..
The idea was came when i imagined if the the our strength get purified like rain process and return into the ashes...and each droplet (soul+spirit) be like a fuel to re ignite the ashes/ember and make them in fire again to rise as like phoenix, bird of fire...to fight all dreams and obstacle, coz...we once was born in fearless child but we lose it when we learn and face life threats..back to innocent sometimes can bring us something good...
The new theme will follow after this poem before it continue with other same theme soon! _Unwritten Soul
A remarkable lesson of wisdom, through your exquisite taste in poetry..Cristina Teodor
From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise Wonderful thoughts, amazing imagery and feelings you spared for us, thank you! I do feel sometimes that everything might happen for a reason and I struggle to learn the lesson, wonder often if this may be what life is about..learning and as you said understanding is the base for peace and calm I do hope I have my calm but I am yet to find my peace..Wonderful write, touched me deep, thank you!
Force the soul to vapor above the ashes crude.. Purified soul levitates between earth an sky. A mega black cloud above the ashes. A spark was created, life ignited. All the lines were marvelous, but you are excellent at creating images. Read and reread this and found it fascinating. You are special and it shows in your visions. Write on. It's only right...I will print this to read to my kin. willie
very heart felt, i love it, it might be the first poem that i purely love for its meaning, and intention................. that was amazing
The return of the soul and spirit For the heart lend the pulses again Breathing confident To raise the flamed wings again Behind the limb Like burning fires Like a phoenix reclaim dreams From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise.......impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.
Something rises, and not merely awakens. We can be awake, yet remain trapped. There must be a reason, a source, a hope, even an object that guides aspirations. A great poem, Soul.
This is meaningful. Innocent lost in maturity. The more mature the more we are anxious. I like your powerful similes and the language of the poem suits the message. Well done Soul
Very nice poem. Reincarnating throughout all eternity would be wonderful... Terry
Philosophical poem.Your explanation is so lucid that the theme becomes crystal clear.Nice write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The great cry for one to rise even from the burning ashes and come forward to face the life challenges with love and devotion.Beautiful poem full of wisdom and courage! Deeply philosophical. I simply love souls poem. Must give 10+