Silentpoet Grl


Someday - Poem by Silentpoet Grl

pulling me close you whisper in my ear
enchanting promises trail through the air
how this is truly a forever love we share.
tightly you wrap me in a warm embrace
stepping back, your hands at my waist
our eyes saying words we dare not speak
sealing love, passion's kiss our lips meet
my breath you have completely captured,
my fragile heart you have been entrusted.
holding my hand together we walk along
days carry on, promises began to change
masks unveiled showing your different face
questioning love, precious memories fade
wondering if it was all just a perfect dream
true colors now display it's merely a facade
hidden, living in silence trying to make sense
you violently shatter my already broken heart,
trapped by what you now call 'love', waiting
my lips, my soul hungrily thirst for the love
once spoke of, but now left cracked and dry
vapid memories escape, leaving me wishing
someday if only I could know real love so true.


Comments about Someday by Silentpoet Grl

  • (1/1/2012 12:53:00 PM)


    At last we see the light, it's been a long dark dreary journey. I pray the light continues
    and becomes blindingly bright.
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  • (12/29/2011 7:10:00 AM)


    Love is like gold, for it is tested by fire. A broken heart is fragile for some moments. It is true that we cannot mend a broken heart. No words are soothing enough to reach the deepness of the pain. Just to comfort you: That boy don't merit your love. There is somebody for you. As we say here in France, For every woman or men, there is always a pair of shoes dedicated to their feet...
    Carry-on writing. Writing feeds the soul and free the spirit....

    A very nice write though coming from a broken heart...
    Keep-sharing your works of art, Silent Poet Girl.
    Virginia
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  • (12/26/2011 10:18:00 PM)


    This poem is deep, filled with love so pure, longing, and despair.
    You have captured the real deal in this touching write.
    My heart goes out to you.
    It takes great courage to love.
    Hope you have true love for yourself. In loving yourself you will find true love in another.
    No one can replace or mend our hearts, except ourselves. We are not marked by who loves us, but how we love.
    Such a great write, your heart beats with every line.
    So genuine, straight from your heart to mine.
    Keep penning, you have true talent. I thoroughly enjoy your work.
    Sincerely, Kara
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  • (12/24/2011 8:35:00 AM)


    YOU HAVE TO LEARN THE ART OF HIDING UR EMOTIONS. INSTEAD OF STATEMENTS TRY HINT THRU IMAGES OR SYMBOLS. NICE N SINCERE INDEED. (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (12/23/2011 8:49:00 AM)


    As long as you believe in someday, all hope is not gone. Love is like a diamond, everytime you look at it, it shines a different color. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Kevin East (12/22/2011 6:47:00 AM)


    The sweetness and bitterness of love..felt and written in pain.
    Wonderful.
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  • Federico del Corazón (12/19/2011 4:19:00 PM)


    best wishes Silent Poem Girl! I thought this poem has a great start but at the end I had to read it more then once. over all a good poem from the heart (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2011 12:30:00 AM)


    Wow! This peom got to my emotions, I would love to come and read it again.... Great work! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/18/2011 1:51:00 PM)


    I love this writing! ! ! I like the 1st part it tells about love and its feeling! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2011 12:54:00 PM)


    As I started reading this, I was like 'Awe, how sweet, SO CUTE' Then you totally flipped it into pain. This was exceptional! Amazing work my friend. (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2011 7:26:00 AM)


    great poem my friend..someone somewhere is looking for his real lover...don't loose hope! (Report) Reply

  • Cosmic Dreamer (12/18/2011 6:26:00 AM)


    You have captured the two extremes of love so well here... The exhilarating highs of love are only matched by the despairing lows... I love this poem... (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 10:06:00 AM)


    the sweet and sour of love. so true, excellent write brought back many memories from my youth. hormones should never be mistaken for real love. (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 6:35:00 AM)


    you will find real love, it will come. a great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 16, 2011


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