Unwritten Soul


Sunset Blues - Poem by Unwritten Soul

It's been a long time
before i step to this land again
But tonight I'm home
Where each edge keeps history
Nightingale sing about night glory
I'm just lost by the voice
gentleness kill the noise
Slowly my eyes closed
but then i see you
Your smile never change
Appear in dream image

The photos on the wall
Revisit past, memories recall
Never forget how we riding a bike
I was afraid you said we got new brake
Child time such a pure snowflakes
My brother now our life separate

Time and space then show powers
Under this tree, witness of ours
Fighting for an ice cream
I'm crying and you gave to me
Said 'Please do not screaming'
Sometimes it went extreme
But now just a funny dream
All enclosed in this little frame
Hanging as the family wall of fame

I looked into your eyes
You looked unto me
We shared our dreams
Sometimes we share silent scream
You want to make a tall tower
I said i will watch you at this river
Big but something not seen

It's been a long time
To back this hometown
Yesterday i was around
Alarm makes night-dream harm
Waking up present left yesterday warm
I'm going, leaving home again
Bye...Our family waving hands
I just didn't see you
The bus is waiting but i searching for you
Take my seat i keep my next journey
But later, i see someone walking on the street
It's you and our eyes meet
Too late but capture memory cues
The same person i knew
My brother cool like a dew
One day we will talk a review
Till the time bring you to me
Or future separate thee
Thou, My brother is always you

: : : : : : : : : : : Theme: Memories: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Memories, past, childhood, farewell...part of this life
Ringing bell will be missed when a silence live....
Age of past build a strong base of future......

Time we passed for better future
it still cant change the moment we had together :)

It just a synthetic story with imaginary with family gallery
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Comments about Sunset Blues by Unwritten Soul

  • (6/4/2017 1:59:00 PM)


    The title alone is haunting....and the work hints at just that perfect, last moment of sadness. Well done, Soul. (Report) Reply

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  • Muzahidul Reza (11/18/2016 9:32:00 AM)


    It's been a long time
    before i step to this land again
    But tonight I'm home
    Where each edge keeps history
    Nightingale sing about night glory

    wonderfully written, interesting to read
    (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (11/10/2016 10:29:00 PM)


    Really Beautifully Done! ! ! Beautiful Heart Warming Thoughts! ! ! Another Wonderful Write! ! !
    Thank You So For Sharing! ! ! I Agree With Christopher! Love Your Imagination! ! !
    (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/12/2016 4:51:00 AM)


    Slowly my eyes closed. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Tye (5/9/2016 8:01:00 AM)


    Wonderful tittle and a great poem, I just love your sense of imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/9/2016 2:18:00 AM)


    I looked into your eyes
    You looked unto me
    We shared our dreams
    Sometimes we share silent scream
    You want to make a tall tower
    I said i will watch you at this river
    Big but something not seen.

    Simply I can say beautiful and outstanding. Certainly you are deserving much.
    (Report) Reply

  • Miroslava Odalovic (5/13/2011 10:38:00 AM)


    It's beautiful Soul :) , really encouraging, thanks for writing this. Love, Miroslava. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011


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