Sweet Sour Apple Bites Poem by Unwritten Soul

Sweet Sour Apple Bites

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Orchard of apple and variety
Here you come, the apples lover
Come sing and praise like always
'Shining around the skin
Your colour is my favorite apple
The fresh one
So is your taste'

I am the apple to smile and sing
'If i am a green
A sweet sour love
Bite one, bite two
Bite still
Taste me my apples lover
Taste my sweet sour love
I'm green and sour
Pluck me bite me my lover'

The hunter replied
Bite one and some
Tasted your sour love
Bite still because i loved
Because i am the apple lover'

Apples smile continue the song
'If i am a red apple
Sweet and moist
Bite one, then two
Bite more
Taste my sweet life
Red as my love, taste me nice
Bite one bite some
Taste me sweet you will like it'

'Green or Red
Bite sweet or bite sour
I must love you my apples
simply because...
I am the true apple lover'
Explained hunter

Sweet red or sour green
Sugar rich energy will reach your heart sooner
Running in your blood and pump the beat so dear
'O apples my dear i grow you in orchard to be with me so near'
Confessed by gardener, before apple answered
'You work hard and love so sincere, will fruit you love every year'

Bite one, sweet or sour everyday
Promise keeps you away from doctor
Bite one Bite some Bite all say the lover
Energy, Protect you always said apple

If you love something, make it further
This is what apple and hunter tell you, No Fears

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Credit to Ahmed Khaled to point some issues of apples
so what i can say here it was inspired by Ahmed Khaled and fair to say this is our collaboration. Took of the chance to dedicate this poem for Steve, Co founder of Apple...All his courage to chase his dream is what i really called as an apple lover...

Meaning of this poem,
I want to talk about 'Do what you want' choose what you like
It's not all about apples, it is about...if you have a dream (your future)
make it real either you taste it difficult or easy you will always enjoyed it
just like i tell you in the story, green or red, sweet or sour
the apple hunter/gardener still like it, why simple cause the hunter like it
..As you know what you like and nod for the challenge, you will
get satisfied with what are you having, doing...it's your favorite choice
..Include the words 'An apple a day keeps doctor away' hoping you
understand, you will safe and satisfy if you choose the path you like
and you will safe from regret..Chase your dream :) _Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Forougi 02 October 2011

A very delicate one packed with the metaphors of nature and beauty...10....

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Asif Andalib 02 October 2011

We go through sweet and sour experiences in our life. Both have lessons for us and we should accept the bitter experiences and be patient cause life will bear sweet fruits some day or other. Very nice allegory. Thanks for sharing.

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Eric Cockrell 02 October 2011

follow your dream no matter the cost! good poetry!

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Cristina Teodor 02 October 2011

Sweet or sour, life experiences will fulfill our desire to make a dream come true. Taste from the life apple instead of having regrets from not trying at all. An outstanding analogy, great composition..Cristina Teodor

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2011

Great annotations and anecdotes on apple and the combined appleton therapy as poetic prophylaxix with most adorable member Ahmed Khaled from Russian Federation.While not only it covers all the experiences surrounding the centric syndrome of an apple whatever be its colour but also has a deep social message concerning the humanitarian aspect of living.This poem therefore is an aesthetic and of paramount importance to its readers.I appreciate hereby as one of them.Thanks for sharing us your views.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2018

'Green or Red Bite sweet or bite sour I must love you my apples simply because... I am the true apple lover' Explained hunter.....haunting expression with an broad outlook. Whether red or green, sweet or sour a true apple lover tastes it, so also a person with divine power feels the same as to hurdle or ecstacy. He faces difficulty and enjoys ease. A great philosophical poem shared startlingly. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2013

well, even though i was living not too far from where steve was dying, i never considered this poem to have anything to do with computers. i was thinking apples, the fruit, and sex/romance. i guess i'm just an american guy! ! ! thanks for sharing. as for an apple a day................... i have a little poem about that for you other folk who, like me, thought this would have to do with apples, especially if you like (what i hope is a little) humor. :) 27 An Apple A Day....... [Apples; Health; Stupid Guy; Humor? ; Pretty Short] online 8/17/2013

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Ruby Honeytip 30 December 2012

Live safe from regret.....beautiful: -) I like red apples btw.....but I'm a Samsung girl lol. Great poem...great message 10/10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 November 2011

I enjoy an apple now and again? ? ? ?

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Sonali Sings 13 November 2011

I see your poem from slight different perspective... As a fruit is dear to a gardener so are all kids to their parents... no matter how much pain they give while upbringing, what results they may give in future, they are all beloved to their caregivers... Brilliant work! ! !

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