The Curls Of Destiny (Te Amo) Poem by Unwritten Soul

The Curls Of Destiny (Te Amo)

Rating: 4.3


Warm loves
In crimson blood
Own me in desire of red
Silk its beauty within me
On my heart shaped feelings
Awakening life for soul dreaming

Climbed to the sun
Dreamed of light to touch
Junction the ground to the stars
On the same root, stand as one we are
Sharing our life in a single strand
Blossom around the stem
Joy to silver moon

But who can seal all dreams to be true
Cut away from you, in foreign hand
As those fire eyes steal the rose
Now story streaked in branches
Flow of dream just written
Differently as it followed
The curls of destiny

Adorn words chain around different lips
Persuade love to revive petal dreams
For once again back to bloom,
But not for the same ones
Just the second time
In your arms
But the past
The dream and my dear ones
Trapped in my eternal rose layers
Lost in memories, beauty of past can't erased
But when people say, waves of time will heal everything
As the broken branches will bud a new too
Returning Rose to red may be true
But, Oh the Irony of flaming fires
Inside your eyes
We know the truth
The secret of your lies
Sweet little lie only to steal the dream
Because Lost burning desire knows no gentle
Till everything under your hand, is all what you desire.

The curse replace sweet
Another curl of my destiny
As your fingers swirl encircled me
Wrap my soul to be in your palm gently
And crushed it in vain, the blood flew pain
No, not the first one but also not the last one
This rosy heart is losing petals, beauty of my life
Nothing left to keep me alive, I am just a bleeding rose

You have burning flames
Power in hand, but soul sacrificed
As if fires inside was burned your heart
But if you find regret, we still cant undo time
For me, only the warm ashes after burn
Bleed me crimson, pale my heart
White i be, as no joy in me

Day by day petals of love dry and fallen
Revive me to live in a your crystal jar
Sown me with pure golden thread
But you never make me whole
Like the one i was before
A heart shaped rose
Soaked me with diamond bead
But without my soul i already dead
Because of value you forgotten in me
So you lost the chance for my rose red again

You may steal my rose smiles away from beloved tree
And your power may buy you this whole world
But life is not about owning all, everything
If you know living without heart and soul
Nothing is who you are, my dear
You've lost the chance I've gave
For now it's for your turn
To walk on the karma roads
Teach you the power on us
The curls of destiny

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This poem was written for my friend, Rohit Sharma who is one of my first friends in Poem Hunter. Hejust released a first Novel published by Mahaveer, on 12/12/12 which called 'Te Amo...I love you' So as a sign to support him, i penned this poem and an artwork. and were inspired by the story of the Novel. The novel is about a tragedic love, full with love, pain and suspense and heartbeat surprise. Unfortunately it only available in India.

Thus, i hope my dear friends and reader to support him by visiting his FB link (just for this book) here
https: //www.facebook.com/TeAmoTheBook
(i dont hve a FB account but i just share the link)

A song as a part to imagine the heartfelt story
Evanescence-My heart is broken; , link _ http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=f1QGnq9jUU0

and the official trailers were posted by him on youtube:
http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=52xHZ-G6q0U
http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=W_EiAy6FEq0
http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=o-5ZIeh6RGo

More than that. i wrote this to one of my close PH friend, a sis to me
Domestic violence abusing her heart and soul but i told you sis
be strong and kill the fire! ! ! and nothing can harm u!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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I was imagining of a promise between a trunk and a rose flower
to be a great companion as a single tree for life, stand by the same root under the same roof of stars moon and sun but life not as we wished sometimes as then the greed hand steal the rose just because loved to own it but never know how to care to preserve the rose beauty heart and freshness...even he put the rose in a jar of crystal or sew the broken petals with golden thread...or soaked with wealthy..it wont let it survive, as life is more than that...and we can try to do but we cant change all as it's part of life when it comes to final fate, but with destiny we can dare lot of changes, because for this, we will see the power curls of destiny

Check out the Artwork i did and the song link below
http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=f1QGnq9jUU0
..Just Enjoy with No Pain...the rest of the Novel is not so dark! _Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 15 December 2012

so traumatically written dear soul.i enjoyed the forth part.really impressing. all say human can build his/her fortune and destiny but i wonder what about flowers and trees or the roses.can they build their destiny? of course they cant.or as you have mentioned the curl of destiny. reminds me this statement MARCUS AURELIUS has once said: ADAPT YOURSELF TO THE LIFE YOU HAVE BEEN GIVEN, AND LOVE THE PEOPLE WHOM DESTINY SURROUNDED THEM. it may be true about your friend she must adapt or deal with that passion.your love may help her. any way so touching (the love between a rose and a tree) ~nb

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Kee Thampi 15 December 2012

who can seal all dreams to be true Cut away from you, love to be read again a pain filled my heart..... love kee

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An eternal tribute paid to your friend! In these days of miserliness of expression and thoughts I appreciate you for your eloquent wavelength of passion and feeling. What is written makes you much much much written dear Soul.

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Elena Sandu 16 December 2012

How beautiful you are, Soul! Hope one day I could get my hands on this book, for sure I will love it as much as I loved this poem. Congratulations to our friend and to you also sweet Soul!

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Lyn Paul 16 December 2012

Thank you for sharing these wonderful words.. It is hard to believe domestic violence is still so strong. I have saved these words

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Mj Lemon 17 December 2017

Soul, this is a magnificent work. I had to read and reread it a few times. There's something about the melody, the rhyme....it is as though there is an echo. And that, I think, is fitting....as the title suggests, destiny or fate can curl back on itself. And that may just be the finest vision of karma.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2017

To walk on the karma roads... it is the main theme of the poem. All people as per their karma(deeds) enjoy the happiness or sorrowfulness in life. It is a great tribute to your friend. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016

Blossom around the stem! ! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.

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Frank James Davis 21 April 2013

A significant, artful and empathetic piece. Extremely fine work, Soul!

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Neela Nath Das 31 January 2013

A beautiful work. Thought provoking. You have drawn the reality nicely.Your art work is splendid Soul!

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