The Dream Called Life Comments

A great poem brilliantly expressed. Very interesting.

Beautiful poem... dreadful reading. She makes it sound like a grocery list.

what is the speaker objective

Beautiful poem having intensive depiction and nice diction.

That there be nothing after to upbraid Dreamer or doer in the part he played; Whether tomorrow's dawn shall break the spell, A strong Moral. Joshua.

In the dark tower! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I burst the glittering bubble, excellently written using some wonderful imageries and similes

How dreamwise human glories come and go; Whose momentary tenure not to break, Walking as one who knows he soon may wake, So fairly carry the full cup, so well Beautiful stanza, so nicely crafted. 10++++

I wonder about the translation, how well it gets the diction of the Spanish original. It does work in English, and I like this exploration of what we typically call reality and dream. I am particularly struck by the line, How dreamwise human glories come and go. -GK

Very nice. Enjoyed the sincerity in the poem. Thanks for sharing.

'But whether.......he soon may wake'......... liked the lines.

Dream wise human glories come and go. Nice inference. Thanks for sharing it here.

a very interesting poem of life's dream?

Dawn shall break.... thanks for sharing....

Which i found myself! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Exceptionally written, enjoyed it. Well done.

Was I dreaming then or dreaming now? What is reality? What is not? thought provoking, the meter is perfect, He repeats words but is never cliche' or tedious. beautiful!

...............a great poem....enjoyed... ~ When dreaming, with the night, shall pass away. ~

Wonderful poem! Reading this is like revisiting my past dreams, and my present clarity of being 'awake'.

Lovely piece of poetry written here!