Let's poison us together
And take this dagger to pierce our hearts
As we buried them to the edge of a field
Where them will grow into the death of a romance
Take that demise and bring it to the king
Warning him that the rule has killed
The two star-crossed lovers in their youth
As their crucifixes are pinned to his heart
I would suggest them to never give up and fight till the very end......let killer cry on his own misery. Your cryptic note is worth reminder to all lovers.
I've just lated a new carpet, and I've got to lay new patio slabs first, and you've got to walk Cooper. Tomorrow's better, (might change our minds by then as it might be a sunny day) ; -)
Powerful poem, Lee Ann. you bring in a new imagery there
Tragic love story of Romeo and Juliet is once again brought to life in brilliant verse. Bravo LeeAnn!
Tale of two lovers ending on with a note which is worth reading, you made it very interesting LeeAnn, Liked the way you wrote. *****
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Shakespeare would be proud! LeeAnn, this is beyond MAGNIFICENT! ! !