The Suicide Note Of Romeo And juliette Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Suicide Note Of Romeo And juliette

Rating: 5.0


Let's poison us together
And take this dagger to pierce our hearts
As we buried them to the edge of a field
Where them will grow into the death of a romance
Take that demise and bring it to the king
Warning him that the rule has killed
The two star-crossed lovers in their youth
As their crucifixes are pinned to his heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 25 April 2023

Shakespeare would be proud! LeeAnn, this is beyond MAGNIFICENT! ! !

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Ricky M 26 April 2023

I would suggest them to never give up and fight till the very end......let killer cry on his own misery. Your cryptic note is worth reminder to all lovers.

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Pallavi Tripathi 25 April 2023

Heartbreaking, just as their deaths

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David Wood 25 April 2023

I've just lated a new carpet, and I've got to lay new patio slabs first, and you've got to walk Cooper. Tomorrow's better, (might change our minds by then as it might be a sunny day) ; -)

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 April 2023

Wonderful poem LeeAnn! Loved it : ) x

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 May 2023

Powerful poem, Lee Ann. you bring in a new imagery there

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 May 2023

Splendid writing, LeeAnn. This is in my favorites.

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Nosheen Irfan 26 April 2023

Tragic love story of Romeo and Juliet is once again brought to life in brilliant verse. Bravo LeeAnn!

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M. Asim Nehal 26 April 2023

Tale of two lovers ending on with a note which is worth reading, you made it very interesting LeeAnn, Liked the way you wrote. *****

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Anjandev Roy 26 April 2023

Such an outstanding work.......thanks for sharing......

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