The Way To Eden Poem by Tareq Jalabi
The Way To Eden
under these fancy clothes
there was a tired body
and a mind with no goals
plus a soul that was bloody
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my troubled mind
went from bad to worse a fall
and had none to guide
but my dying soul
.......
live your life like
there is no tomorrow
just do what you like
and you'll never feel sorrow
.......
this advice I've taken
and haven't worked for me
the adviser was mistaken
'am worse than i used to be
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if you want you to mean something,
and not to be forgotten
think always of helping
not of what you've gotten
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consider life after death
then to heaven may pass
before He takes your breath
think of Hell and Eden's grass
Life is a little surprise, and end of life is huge one....this poem is greatly composed and with clear massage.....
This is an excellent poem.....a meaningful thoughts and indicative to the theme... good write.....
I mos def like this piece better than she. It's a very well put and connected story. verse to verse it flows wonderful. I would go with this one for your class.
‘…and had none to guide // but my dying soul…’ NICE LINES Ten++ dr.sakti
it's a philosophical piece with great twist actually comforting to see young poets such as yourself addressing the much needed theme of our time-service to others! Good write
Great poem! I would definitely use this poem! Keep up the good work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 3:23:19 PM # 1.0.0
good lesson in this one i would choose this poem