Truth In You Poem by Unwritten Soul

Truth In You

Rating: 4.4


Raise your hand
Against the sky
If you are fallen again
Dare the body on the ground
To bury all the weakness deep down
Raise spirit awake like a strong mount

Life is a mission
Be clear in your vision
Survive you in all perceptions
Right or wrong carefree the judgements
As long your sober mind leads a direction
All be alright but never surrender your pride
If you want to be a strong woman
Live the life with your rights

Essence of rose
Touch you a beauty
Not the only eyes to see
Stand strong like root of oak
Brave as grass even in the desert
Without any doubt in self
Spirit in woman renews
Truth In you

Life gives options
Only in the clear vision
There are solutions in any situation
Strong women won't cry over weaknesses
From each weakness is how they build strength
A strength then step you to be stronger
Stronger, fearless like men

Every road leads different paths
Every life born with rights
Let it always remind you
Be a strong woman
To breakthrough
Truth in you

Be a strong women
If estranged voices down you
Don't you ignore your voice within
Distraction comes and you must overcome
Not lose your track embrace your grace
Soft but a source to be strong
Confident but never stubborn

Never afraid
If you fall again
Fist your hand
Against the sky
Because of you
A strong woman
Born with rights
Truth In you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem to stand for every woman, Yes it just a simple one but i just tell what the truth is, and this time is for me to stand for women. The domestic violence, harassment, and the latest global attention case in India, showing world at the worst treat to womankind
I am not saying in India or any countries but it based on people mind and self attitudes. So as the whole world need to hold hand to stop these bad people from developing a cancer in the human kind. Respect and honor must be first thing for everyone either you are a man or woman. Thanks to Sir M.D Nair for fixing some line cheers to u!

To women
A woman is not about live in beauty, women have a mission in their life and other life, like a mother is a base for their children future. you have rights to have education to share opinion but never cross your womanhood. And life is shared for every person to live in their rights. If you are oppressed then claim your right not for self but for life, and the future because every human has heart to feed.
You are not mean to compete to claim position of men but rights is your right

To Men
Respect femininity not break your masculinity
As respect your mother wont be that difficulty
If you are a strong wise men, you wont be so act badly

Please Respect everybody! _Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 21 January 2013

A wonderful assertion of woman's strength and greatness! She shouldn't remain a weakling, she should look within and imbibe strength from inside and never be let down by what others say! A great exhortation to the fair gender to rise up and clamour for their rights! ! A powerful write, Soul! !

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I agree with Valerie and share the feeling that women still have to ascend much more. The pieces of advice given to women are welcome..The format is great next.. A unique Soul poem! Please, consider editing here and there if you don`t mind....

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Nader Baheri 18 January 2013

not only this is confirmed by all women but its for the men either. the messages i think is written for every one not just the women.even the men, to be strong and not to be weak, fist our hand against the weakness. women have the beauty like the Venus but all of them have the power to be even Isis. although this shows your tact but it takes so long.i mean for women to protect themselves from being taken advantage or not being abused and for men to respect.this is humanity and the one who rapes doesnt know about humanity. so i think women can not be protected, each of them can protect themselves.i like the line which refers to respecting all women as if they are our moms or our sisters. muchas gracias for sharing~nb

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Saadat Tahir 17 January 2013

Essence of rose Touch you a beauty Not the only eyes to see Stand strong like root of oak Brave as grass even in the desert Without any doubt in self Spirit in woman renew Truth In you great message...lovely lines, contemporary and persuasive liked

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Kanav Justa 16 January 2013

The message was so clearly expressed... well done

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

This poem is espicially meant for womankind. It fights against the worst treatment to womankind like domestic violence, and harassment. Here poetess encourages the women through her ink to be courageous and to follow truth. Women should build strength from each weakness. They should stand strong like oak tree. They should be confident but never stubborn. They should enjoy their rights. Dear Soul, as per your quotation from Sir M.D Nair '' A woman is not about live in beauty, women have a mission in their life and other life, like a mother is a base for their children future. you have rights to have education to share opinion but never cross your womanhood. And life is shared for every person to live in their rights. If you are oppressed then claim your right not for self but for life, and the future because every human has heart to feed. You are not mean to compete to claim position of men but rights is your right''. Dear Soul you have so nicely and astutely inscribed this poem. I quote... Life gives options Only in the clear vision There are solutions in any situation Strong women won't cry over weaknesses From each weakness is how they build strength A strength then step you to be stronger Stronger, fearless like men ****************************** Never afraid If you fall again Fist your hand Against the sky Because of you A strong woman Born with rights Truth In you Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2016

Protect the human race! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Frank James Davis 17 April 2013

Wise poetic advice for both sexes. Hopefully, Soul, some will listen.

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Neela Nath Das 30 January 2013

Soul, a nice message you conveyed thru this poem.Women should be mentally strong.Women are not only a playthings of some people with basic instincts. But, it's time taking matter.Thanks for focusing light on this burning topic.

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Jinal Oswal 25 January 2013

Hi Soul, it is a remarkable act from your side. Everyone should know that respect and honor comes first. Wonderful poem! ! !

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