Unwritten Soul

True Love When I'M With You - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Would you tell my heart
Even in a whisper of truth
If there is any mirror
For me to see my true reflection
More than i can see in your eyes
Because in yours I have found me
True me when i am with you

My way is a long journey
I am a little ship in the stormy sea
To taste all drops of love in this water
I know i will never be lost
Because with your love be my lighthouse,
Guiding me, as true loves do
And I've found when i am with you

Will i ever forget those hands
Thick skin of your hands
Always a silk to be on my face
For this pair that hold me when i was no one
For this hands that's feed me love
Perhaps this is a touch of true love
Because true love when i am with you

Beauty, someday may aged
Your loves however never wrinkle
When each line comes appear on you
They only tell me, oh how many years
You've caring me... and you still
Life can be wiser, love last forever
And i see it on you

Purer water than midnight dew
I found drops fallen from you
When the sun and life ask you to...
Harvest your loves as prove you have for me
For me you do all with no complain
Exchange drops to feed me
Is there any loves to be compared?
Because one true love is from you

God knows what in my heart
Never i ever had a wish
Own a mountain of gold to be mine
But If i could I give all diamonds for you
Above all, i knew things never worth to live with
So enough If i would to have, I'll back my past time
Would always hold hand in hand without a second missed
And this is the only way for i keep my happiness
Because true happiness when i am with you

So many patience you have in me, in me
I know sometimes i did despair you
For that i still learn to be the one
To be the best for you
Worth your loves
For me

In time when you can't hold the strength
I shall return all loves back to you
With true loves I am with you
Because of you
My father...

I see my real reflection in you
Could you see in me?
and this is because
True love when i am with you (whisper)

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poem that i chose to celebrate the PH contest

Tribute to someone special, i never write about him before
but this is one thing we should share
not with me only, yours too
The man that love me since first day i born
and forever i know he will
with love unconditionally
I wanted to write this many times but delayed as i
i always cant grab true words of emotion
and many events force me to make it to be here now

This write actually inspired by three stories
My lab friend, Hans and my father&me

and i specially also dedicated to my friend Hans VR and his late father that he lost last few weeks, i just wanted to say, life will be wiser true loves are forever...and never will take it away from you
you are so wise Hans, and it is a reflection of how your great good father
taught you....I am sure he proud of you till the last second he had
and all my friends let wish them both happy always in hearts

_Unwritten Soul

Comments about True Love When I'M With You by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/15/2017 7:23:00 AM)

    It is a great tribute to a father from his lovely daughter. The expression is touching and captivating. There is nice presentation of true love too. Let it be quoted...

    Beauty, someday may aged
    Your loves however never wrinkle
    When each line comes appear on you
    They only tell me, oh how many years
    You've caring me... and you still
    Life can be wiser, love last forever
    And i see it on you...

    I appriciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/4/2016 5:56:00 AM)

    I see my real reflection in you! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (10/7/2013 9:55:00 PM)

    A nice write up with a tribute to her father. (Report) Reply

  • Jesus James Llorico (10/5/2013 10:17:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem, a great tribute to true friends
    and a loving father. Truly a passionate write.
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  • Jr Cuyam (9/29/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    Wow soul this is very nice write (Report) Reply

  • (9/27/2013 6:33:00 PM)

    like your poems, poems with similar views and values often echo (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (9/25/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    a lovely and passionate tribute to father by a daughter (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/22/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    Beautiful outpouring of love of a daughter for her father! As we advance in age, we come to realize more and more how much our parents mean to us! ! I am sure, your father will be much pleased to read this! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (9/20/2013 3:45:00 PM)

    An exquisite poem Soul, a wonderful tribute to your father, and a joy to read. Very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas (9/20/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    indeed stunning tribute by brilliant poet/poetess to his/her father.
    touching and moving poem, if i say these words in appreciation of your poem, i don't think so it would be complete justice regarding ur poem...
    more than just stunning tribute, loved it as u wrote it, looks as every core of ur heart was risen while writing.
    he will be with you Soul, INSHALLAH
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  • Ramesh Rai (9/19/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    i have already commented. thank you so much with my heartiest pleasure for you participation with my liking poem. I always wish for long company with your friend. (Report) Reply

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (9/19/2013 2:49:00 PM)

    this is a lovely poem, shows your love for your father so much. Until you keep him in your memory, he will be always with you. (Report) Reply

  • (9/19/2013 4:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful, could be a love song! (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/19/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    well narrated, the spirit of the poem is very fine. (Report) Reply

  • (9/18/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    True love for humanity is the greatest form of love. The flow, feelings and emotions are of fine quality: -) Soul's special touch for art and humanity: -) (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (9/18/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    excellent intro to your poem. A great tribute (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (9/18/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    I am touched and moved by this nice tribute. Excellent!
    May God bless all fathers with such lovely children as the poet who harbour so profound love for them in their hearts!
    And may God rest Hans VR's father in the best place in the heaven!
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  • Ruby Mostazir (9/17/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    beautiful poem......nice: -) (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (9/17/2013 4:07:00 AM)

    a lovely poetic tribute to your dad, he sure must be proud to read this poem dedicated to him...a lovely write (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    If a country is to be corruption free and become a nation of beautiful minds, I strongly feel there are three key societal members who can make a difference. They are the father, the mother and the teacher.
    Abdul Kalam
    a piece full of love and care..sweet innocent perfect love for a father shown by a sweet innocent perfect poet
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 19, 2013

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