Truth Or Dare Poem by Unwritten Soul

Truth Or Dare

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Truth or Dare

Aesthatic of your face can be seen on mirror
Beauty of your heart only reflected by hearts
Then when time changes mirror forget about who you were
But forever love of hearts for you remain till your break them

Either praise or respect
Either to face or regret
In our younger life we're looking where to go
In our wiser age we may wish to correct whats wrong

Shall we respect our time
to aim we careful, to fix we'll never
It just part of life
Be better next time

Someone mouth may lie to your ears
but your eyes will only lie to yourself
Someone heart may break every part of you
but your own will could heal every inch of you

Either they or you
Either being told or learned
In our weakness we see the strongest
In our strongest time it just other just weaker

Truth or Dare
Agree or not
Depends, either
To argue or to think
To understand or to win

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's June 2018 and i havent post anything since April, and at very last day i just try to sit down to write, well i couldnt...something distract my mind, and now at very quite night, a line of past thinking return and it helped me to pour this Truth or Dare poem.

It just essentially to remind myself and maybe others, dont care about something we couldnt change, instead try to understand it...and preserve our heart to cater good, because i believe it revolves around us..and dont buy into arguing for a point because a discussion is to understand and look with clear vision, but to win because self satisfaction wont help us...so for that i write Truth or Dare...just a simple poem, maybe to common and boring to some. hahaha but the truth is to dare to think about it wink wink ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2018

It is true that aesthetic of our face can be seen on mirror for a short time but beauty of heart is reflected by heart ever which a mirror can't do. We argue to have a discussion for better understanding not for quarreling.. We should not care about something we could change but we can do good for others. I quote here......... Truth or Dare Agree or not Depends, either To argue or to think To understand or to win A beautiful poem shared.

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Mj Lemon 04 July 2018

Very thought provoking, Soul. You remind that every action or inaction carries consequences. The truth is in the reality that all behaviours will yield results. The dare is in contemplating the possibilities. Great verse, Soul

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Hans VR 08 July 2018

The two first lines: what a superbly and grand opening of the poem. I love it very much, just as the whole rest of the poem. Excellent!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2018

'In our wiser age we may wish to correct whats wrong' - yes, we all should do that, and it's never too late!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2018

Truth or Dare Agree or not Depends, either To argue or to think To understand or to win.....so touching with nice theme. This is really a beautiful poem so ly executed. nicely executed.

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Rafique Farooqi 21 August 2018

But forever love of hearts for you remain till your break them Either praise or respect Either to face or regret In our younger life we're looking where to go In our wiser age we may wish to correct whats wrong........is wonderful wording.

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Rafique Farooqi 21 August 2018

But forever love of hearts for you remain till your break them Either praise or respect Either to face or regret In our younger life we're looking where to go In our wiser age we may wish to correct whats wrong......is wonderful wording dear poetess.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 August 2018

A great didactic pearls of wisdom and motivational poem wow. True love remains even when the mirror shows changes perhaps due to age etc. nice things you write poetess. Thumbs up.

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Muhammad Ali 04 August 2018

Hi friend. Truth i limited and does not posses elasticity. Lie is boundless and remains a lie. Hearts can't escape from pain, though pain is also an element in the bonding mixture of relationships. ... Civilizations, and the wisdom that we learned and read and listen teach us to say good words and lines and poems because these are good manners and do what.... :) Nice poem and a reflection of a nice heart.

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