Understand Me? Poem by Unwritten Soul

Understand Me?

Rating: 4.3


You come to me close,
and i avoiding you
but there's something
something you need to know

How could i say something
How can i find a way
perfectly to you
without a shy fly

As i look into your eyes
my mind so speechless
to find correct words
but i afraid you will hurt
or what will you think
Somehow i need to tell you..Now
coz i cant take it longer

But in front of many people now
I have to and i need to tell you
And i find my own way
Bravely whispering you closely
close enough between you and me
so listen when i say

'Hey drunker, this is not a toilet,
it's library and your 'waste' wet my book!
why you wear different pair of shoes
Zip your jean, unwind your mean

Now you away from me, after my words
I am so sorry if i say it too loud
But...Do u understand me? ?
Sorry, just dont drink here (LOL)

: : : : : : Theme: joking in feeling: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : haha
LOL..............Just a joke! lesson..dont get drunk or u
humiliate yourself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 22 June 2011

The great soul has also little problems with people :) Let drunker keep themselves away from this young soul but conscious book lovers have wonderful place in his large soul. I love this poem and assess it 10+++++++++

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drunks are unpredictable, best stay away, good advice, lil soul, with big heart, words of wisdom/10

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A serious subject delt with in a very humerous but powerful way. Well done my friend!

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(De Va) 09 January 2012

smiles....if only one could reach a drunken mind...awwwww

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Dev Anand 29 November 2018

'Hey drunker, this is not a toilet, it's library and your 'waste' wet my book! why you wear different pair of shoes Zip your jean, unwind your mean. funny situation. in the library........ thank u for the fun of it. and ur audacity with which you speak to him. thank you dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2017

An interesting write. Captivating one. Beautiful poem with amusing depiction. Enjoyed. Thanks a lot.

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Dev Anand 29 August 2017

As i look into your eyes my mind so speechless whispering you closely close enough between you and me Zip your jean, unwind your mean...a good poem revealing lot ... thank you dear poetess. dev

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 June 2017

Lol...a few drinks does make us a little or lot braver to say what is on our mind. I enjoyed this one Soul...10

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Unwritten Soul 13 June 2017

Hahahahahahaha....just i dont drink, soooo.... let it be that way hahaha

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

As i look into you eyes! With the muse of love. Nice work.

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