Unwritten Soul

Violet Symphony - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Echoes from the outside
The shades of evening soul
Step by step dance toward the open windows
Bring out the sounds when the wind blows
Upon my face and around my skin
A melody touches to any hearts,
Hush, again and again till it echoes inside
Erase the elegy of pain and sorrow
Bring the wings to follow the flying sparrow

Come inside and spread the feels
Flaunt me to the air in vibrating melody
Me, diving in tunes of melancholy
Voicing a happy song internally
Stay in spirit for life, love lively

And come an estranged voice
Jump over the notes chasing after me
Fluently you flute the words, pour a new melody
Speaking of music lyrically, blend naturally
Our thoughts write the notes of harmony melody
As thou, a violinist playing my heartstrings
Me, conduct the movement of the story
Dimension of a newly born composition
Deliver a piece, a magical beautiful symphony

We watched the sky painted blue
Cover all the spaces, the air amused
Released by the flying musical notes
Of the freed feeling from my heartstrings,
As we played, and to keep on play over again
Until the sky saturate with intense blue

Halfway of a happy song
Semi before us to complete
Different melody could change the song destiny
As when the tunes can't walk along the symphony
Not anymore to vibrate a way for euphony journey
The united voices crushing against the written lines
Inverse sound, reverse feel, at the end scoring noisy
How can we finish this for another half sheet
Like we end the blissful musical meet
Another half of broken song? for heart bleed?

Your hand still on my heartstrings to play
But when we losing tones, our mind not parallel
For us to retry the song we used to play together
Strong picking chords on me wont be better
Because you pitch high, pick my string loud
Ignore the lyric, don't care the right melody,
As we just want to win but cost the heart lose few strings

Replacing blue, we watched the crimson flow out
From this broken string we may see they fly high,
Shadow the bottom clouds, under the sky it stayed below
To be our violet symphony, shades the sunset backyard
The fusion of our blue and crimson melody

Silence with no more any symphony
Without the string how can a song we could play
Will the broken get fixed when we abandon the pain
And abandoning the lost melody will be a miss to ears
While, forgetting the sweet moments, big lost to hearts
Heart will stir the thought to heal lost without a miss
No solution without calm, always calm peace the mind
And only peaceful mind will understand the sign
We need a sign, may it will lead us a way
To meet and sing together after thousands days

Because days and time keep going, so life is moving on
Someday, we will meet a moment for us to learn deeply
Same to the hearts when we finally fix the strings
And the same melody shall be played again
This innocent song must be returned
Through the same opened window
Rejoining with other flying sparrow
To shade this late evening soul
Echoes from this inside
together we loose the past hurt
Heal the broken heart
To ride in the wind blow
Echoes outside

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This poem actually talk about importance of understanding
In every interaction, communication with everyone around
we may crafting a bond..We may walk togetherness as we share mind
, because we understand each other...but when we lost it
it feels like a beautiful music have bad interaction between
voice, melody, rhythm, and it nothing left but noise...it same to our
relationship among each other, we need to sort out what we can
do respect in different thing, accept to be harmony..
the past will teach us to be wiser, because we never can read
without learning ABC, and we never be an experienced adult without
pass the learning childhood... all we need time to learn
and let heart takes us in any decision...Love that echoes inside
must be amplified outside! _Unwritten Soul

Comments about Violet Symphony by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/16/2018 1:05:00 PM)

    From your poet's note it is clear that we may walk togetherness as we share mind because we understand each other...but when we lost it, it feels like a beautiful music have bad interaction between voice, melody, rhythm, and it nothing left but noise....basing on this theme this poem has been inscribed touchingly. Though this poem is slight lengthy yet it is so beautiful and interesting to read. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Flower Navarre (9/9/2017 12:34:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! ! ! From Top To Bottom Beautifully Wrote! ! ! ! !
    With Beautiful Heart Touching Notes! ! ! ! ! Again! ! ! ! !
    Oh Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! Such Soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :) Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +
    another....saved Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Christopher Tye (11/18/2016 8:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, we could make the world a really great place if we took time to understand each other and truly loved life. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/7/2016 4:33:00 AM)

    Stay in spirit for life! ! With the joy of your heart. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/19/2013 9:33:00 PM)

    a lovely poem. I enjoyed the read. life is to be enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    Life is a glorious celebration; your poetry teaches that, very well.
    Thank you, Soul!
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  • Naseeru Taneemu Annuree (7/31/2012 5:00:00 AM)



    Y-ear.... :)

    Love this poem! ! Just amazing! ! You are a source of inspiration that the world cant afford to lost....! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (7/17/2012 1:17:00 PM)

    .Love that echoes inside must be amplified outside!
    -Unwritten Soul

    amazing write...i hardly comment only to let u know m going thr your works...coz i'll always be left with nothing to write comments when you keep writing in all dimensions...! !
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  • (7/12/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    Magic indeed wisdom in words and a pleasure to read +++10 (Report) Reply

  • Ralph The Elf (6/24/2012 10:20:00 AM)

    i really like this poem...you really did a great job (Report) Reply

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  • Captain Cur (5/27/2012 6:05:00 PM)

    All the pirates on my ship are talking about this fantatic
    piece of beautiful writing. However, if they all followed
    this advice I would be out of business.
    Great endeavor!
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  • Gajanan Mishra (5/23/2012 11:25:00 PM)

    Fine. Congratulation.

    I would like to invite you to read my poems and comment.
    Gajanan Mishra
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  • Saadat Tahir (5/8/2012 5:24:00 AM)

    absolutely amazing and fabulous poem.....i wish it could have been done in a shorter format, would have become more enjoyable and more accessible.

    but lovely write...just the starting lines are worth a million, solidly hold you pinned to the page

    great write

    blessed be
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  • Elena Sandu (4/30/2012 9:16:00 PM)

    Oh dear friend I cannot find one line not to agree with! Amazing write, powerful, bright! Thank you! ! Of course no less than 10. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/29/2012 11:39:00 AM)

    Speechless! I can't find the proper words to clearly say what I feel from reading this stunning reservoir of rich words and imagery: Beauty, Love and Talent magically blended in this great reservoir! 10+++ You are an inspiration to the entire World and it is a great pleasure to read your wonderful and touching works! Thank your also for your valuable comments to my humbled poems! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/19/2012 1:20:00 PM)

    Tuning of relationship.A kind of reciprocity must be there., otherwise, it will be discordant. nice! (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (4/16/2012 7:44:00 PM)

    Your poem is a stream of gentle soothing melody. (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2012 2:33:00 PM)

    Together we loose the past hurt,
    Heal the broken hearts,
    To ride in the wind blow
    Echoes outside...
    ....my dear friends, this is a masterpiece.thank you for sharing it with us...your brother..Siya_! !
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  • Vipins Puthooran (4/15/2012 3:51:00 PM)

    Because days and time keep going, so life is moving on
    Someday, we will meet a moment for us to learn deeply
    Same to the hearts when we finally fix the strings: : : : : : : :
    'tis really the understanding.....
    Dear soul and wabi sabi you people made this poem so fantastically.....
    top marks! ! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 8, 2012

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